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Reviews For Equilibrium
It would have been nice if Sev had found out that Draco had actually taken another students property, instead of Harry trying to take something of Draco's. Still I don't suppose it would have mattered much to Sev. I loved your description of Neville on a broom. 'A drunken loon'--very funny. Good to see that Sev was frightened for HArry even if it was against his inclinations. I wish I could just sit all day and read the rest of the story, but I am afraid I have other things to do. Looking forward to reading three.
I like Severus' and Minerva's good-natured competition about the House points, and the first flying lesson is good. It shows how Severus is already looking out for Harry's welfare even though he doesn't like him (yet?).
Lol. That just made me laugh. Also, the friendship between Snape and McGonagall is so nicely done - I think a lot of people just tend to make Snape his own island, with no friends or whatever, so it's nice to see that he shares a friendly rivalry with McGonagall XD Author's Response: I love both Snape and McGonagall - their friendship will develop more in future. |
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