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Reviews For Equilibrium
Title: Chapter 2 30 May 2022 11:01 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    I hope that Minerva’s parting thoughts foreshadow what will come to pass between Severus and Harry. Thanks for the terrific chapter.
Title: Chapter 2 26 May 2011 5:36 am
Reviewer: Rose (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Heh heh. This line struck me as brilliant- "his third-years drifted into class with the subdued despair of veteran Potions-students"- Just thought I'd say. XD
Title: Chapter 2 17 Jan 2008 12:36 am
Reviewer: wrappedinharry (Signed) [Report This]
    Very good!
    It would have been nice if Sev had found out that Draco had actually taken another students property, instead of Harry trying to take something of Draco's. Still I don't suppose it would have mattered much to Sev.
    I loved your description of Neville on a broom. 'A drunken loon'--very funny.
    Good to see that Sev was frightened for HArry even if it was against his inclinations.
    I wish I could just sit all day and read the rest of the story, but I am afraid I have other things to do.
    Looking forward to reading three.
Title: Chapter 2 22 Sep 2007 9:17 pm
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Well, that first Potions class didn't go so well, did it? I'd love for Severus to realize that Harry was in fact paying attention and taking notes. Hopefully at some point in the future, he will.

    I like Severus' and Minerva's good-natured competition about the House points, and the first flying lesson is good. It shows how Severus is already looking out for Harry's welfare even though he doesn't like him (yet?).
Title: Chapter 2 05 Sep 2007 8:14 am
Reviewer: Sweartoad (Signed) [Report This]
    " Her green robes swirled with a turbulent flair even Snape could appreciate."

    Lol. That just made me laugh. Also, the friendship between Snape and McGonagall is so nicely done - I think a lot of people just tend to make Snape his own island, with no friends or whatever, so it's nice to see that he shares a friendly rivalry with McGonagall XD

    Author's Response: I love both Snape and McGonagall - their friendship will develop more in future.

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