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Reviews For Equilibrium
Title: Chapter 4 30 May 2022 11:32 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Such a creative and unique way to start this chapter!
Title: Chapter 4 24 Sep 2007 8:52 pm
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    I liked your perspective on the Mountain Troll battle--I could almost feel sorry for it, it's so stupid.

    I also liked Severus' grudging admiration for Harry's and Ron's skills in defeating the troll. It was a pretty awesome thing for two first years to do. And it's even near the beginning of the year--they really haven't had time to learn a lot.

    Looking forward to more!
Title: Chapter 4 05 Sep 2007 8:22 am
Reviewer: Sweartoad (Signed) [Report This]
    "Abruptly, Club left him, ripped from his fist. Dumbfounded, he looked about for it. Club had never left him before. Movement above caught his eye and he lifted his gaze. Club floated over his head."

    I think maybe I'll start each review with my favourite line/section. Because that one bit was freaking hilarious XD. Also, the burgeoning relationship between Harry and Snape unfolds - honestly, Snapey, why hide it? (except, of course, for the fact that, if he didn't hide it the entire this entire fanfiction would be like, Harry was sorted ... Snape melted into puddles of love and protectiveness for the boy, determined to take him away from his horrible relatives and raise him as his own. The End.)

    XD

    Author's Response:

    Don't we wish. . . .well, sometimes anyway.


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