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Reviews For Equilibrium
Title: Chapter 9 31 May 2022 12:00 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    The idea of a secret snowball fight between McGonagall and Snape is delightful. I love how she got Harry to open up a bit to her. I hope she uncovers the secrets beneath the compulsion,
Title: Chapter 9 20 Aug 2008 6:51 am
Reviewer: trust severus spy (Signed) [Report This]
    What a lovely chapter! The way you showed McGonagall's concern, and had her draw out Harry was just brilliant.

    I really love the way you ended it, with Harry's exhortation for her to "Thump him with a big cold wet one for me!"
    I'm giving you a "10" for this one--and I usually only do that for the really angsty chapters!
Title: Chapter 9 05 Sep 2007 11:37 am
Reviewer: Sweartoad (Signed) [Report This]
    Two favourite lines this time XD

    "He accepted the small pot of steaming hot tea the house elf offered, and settled in for a nice long sulk. Potter's declaration of hatred annoyed him."

    That bit was funny because Snape is trying to make himself out to be the victim - which is funny because he's an adult and Harry is a kid, and Harry's the one who is now feeling guilty XD

    "Oh, my." Minerva bit her lip and tried not to reveal her shock. She was actually quite fond of Severus, and she didn't like where her thoughts were taking her. "And...erm..what do you do in Professor Snape's quarters, Harry?"

    LOLOLOLOLOLOL! Yeah, I know, not really eloquent but things that I enjoy always make me revert to netspeak XD Plus the way she said it is like, I'm really trying to be subtle in my question but it just doesn't seem to be coming out right ... 8D

    Snape, you are a funny, funny man. Here is some polish. Go use it on your soul XD

    Author's Response: I think Snape has always seen himself as the victim, don't you?
Title: Chapter 9 05 Sep 2007 8:10 am
Reviewer: JMGodfreyIII (Anonymous) [Report This]
    aw poor Sev X(

    Author's Response: Self-understanding sucks, don't it.

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