The way that Snape spoke to Draco was so masterfully played out.
I love your story so far. You do very well in keeping the staff and students in character, and you don't rush the relationship between Snape and Harry as so many others do. I love seeing from Snape's point of view so often.
You are so good! Your sleight-of-hand at chapter's beginning, when you KNEW you had us believing that was Harry--was just inspired!
I love the way Severus played Draco like a musical instrument! Another "10" for you!
Wow at first I though he was talking to Harry. Very Interesting!
SNAPEY. YOU ARE SO SLYTHERIN. I was originally like whoa he's shouting at Harry mkay that's not so different but then I was like WHOA he's shouting at Draco! Niiice.
"The man was so prickly, trying to stay on his good side - if the evil git even had a good side - was bloody near impossible! "
That's it, Harry, hit the nail on the head, but it's ok - Snape is really just directing his old frustrations at James Potter against you. He's probably a little bit pissed that you even exist, frankly, because you are irrevertible proof that Lily and James got married and lived happily-ever-after. But don't worry, he'll get over it and *then* he'll melt into puddles of love and protection over you. Don't worry - it's coming XD
Author's Response: I meant for everyone to think it was Harry...I'm a sneaky sod, I admit. . . .which is why I'm a Slytherin, or course.
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