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Reviews For Equilibrium
Title: Chapter 16 31 May 2022 6:58 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    There were several insightful phrases in this chapter that stood out (i.e., how children feel often influences how they learn, and Dumbledore being dismissive with a gentle condescension, amongst others). Thanks for the great, introspective chapter.
Title: Chapter 16 21 Aug 2008 4:51 am
Reviewer: trust severus spy (Signed) [Report This]
    I am just enjoying your writing SO much! Your depiction of everyone's thoughts and feelings; your ability to keep all the characters so close to canon--it's all wonderful!
Title: Chapter 16 22 Apr 2008 10:12 pm
Reviewer: Elphaba (Signed) [Report This]
    Great Line! "This may be harder than I thought. . . ."
Title: Chapter 16 09 Sep 2007 2:16 pm
Reviewer: Sweartoad (Signed) [Report This]
    LOL. So I go away for like ... a two-day holiday, and not only has this story been fully uploaded, it has also had its sequel uploaded. Niiiiiiiice.

    I love InternalDilemma!Snape, because he's so funny. And full of internal dilemma XD

    Not to mention I'm-trying-to-pretend-I'm-not-looking-out-for-you-when-really-I-am!Snape. He's just funny.

    I love how you made it completely realistic how Snape goes about changing (or trying to XD) his character. I read soooooooo many stories where Snape's like, hmm. I wonder why no one likes me. I think I need to change my dastardly wicked ways, and then he totally wakes up in the morning is is all like WHOA smiles and chocolate. Yeah. I have no love for those stories.

    But I DO have love for this story XD

    Go Snapey C:

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