| Title: Chapter 24
| 08 Feb 2008 5:16 am
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| Reviewer: ObsessedwithHarry (Anonymous)
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I absolutely loved this story! So many others make Harry out to be an emotional wreck because of his home life, but I always thought he was a little stronger than that. I love the interaction between Snape and McGonagall, too. Please write lots more!!
| Title: Chapter 24
| 23 Jan 2008 4:21 am
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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Thankyou for writing this most enjoyable story.
I LOVE this story, you made everyone so IC that the story was even better. Great ideas, sweet moments, funny comments, just beautiful work all together. Theres so much to comment on, so I'll give you them after I read the Sequel. I can't wait, this story was just so GOOD!
"I was reconnoitering. . .watching for threats. It was merely a precaution to safeguard the train's departure."
Lol. LIAR. You are like chocoloate: hard on the outside, soft on the inside, and if you warm it up it melts XD
I amuse myself so with stupid anecdotes XD
I always did wonder why Dumbledore just left Harry there ... then again, if he didn't the first chapter of the first book would be like fifteen pages longer, not to mention that we'd have missed that whole awesome exchange between Hagrid and the Dursleys in like chapter three (or whatever chapter it was XD )
Now I'm off to read the sequel (again) and review XD
I loved this story! However, I really, really would recommend putting Evolution's chapters up over time. It would really increase the number of people who would notice your writing and increase the number of reviews because more people would review for each chapter. Anyway, great work! I look forward to Evolution!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'll follow your suggestion. Cheers.
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