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Title: What's Wrong with Snape? 15 Dec 2007 8:24 pm
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, wow, poor Alec! I have no idea what's wrong with Snape. It could be anything from someone impersonating him with Polyjuice, to being under some kind of spell, to being stressed out over something. But even if he was really stressed out, that last encounter was just exceedingly harsh.

    I really hope Dumbledore is able to help Alec and Severus, and figure out what's going on!

    Author's Response: You will soon find out just what is wrong with Snape. Thanks for all the reviews!
Title: Chirstmas Time Again 15 Dec 2007 8:16 pm
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Another great chapter! It's enjoyable reading about how Alec and his friends are learning the Animagus process. It's certainly a lot of work, but I'm sure they'll manage it.

    Good to see Sirius and Remus again, and I'm glad Alec and Severus had a good Christmas. And a snowball fight---too cute!

    Author's Response: They will eventualy master it, like probably in thier third year. And I just couldn't resist adding in a snowball fight!
Title: Dobby 15 Dec 2007 8:08 pm
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, Snape's revenge was perfect. Poor bald Lockhart. I imagine losing his hair was much worse than losing his bones, at least for him. He's so vain.

    Loved Snape being right behind Josh and overhearing him. Poor Josh, but thank heavens he didn't say anything really bad!

    Author's Response: Snape does always seem to be right behind Josh. Poor kid! :)
Title: Forms Revealed 15 Dec 2007 8:04 pm
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Very cool animagus forms! I particularly like the snow leopard for Alec, though a raven would be fun, too. At least Lisa gets to fly, or she will once she masters the transformation.

    It's very interesting how you're having them have to learn so much about their animal forms. I never really thought about Animagi having to do that, but it makes a lot of sense.

    And I wouldn't want to be Lockhart now. That man never learns, does he?

    Author's Response:

    Lockhart will never learn! :)

Title: Duels 11 Dec 2007 7:45 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Another great chapter! I loved the dueling, and protective dad Severus is wonderful. Maybe Draco will think twice before using an unknown curse.

    I'm thinking Hermione must have the diary this time. She probably couldn't resist looking in a book. And now the Chamber is open and Alec is hearing the basilisk?

    He really should go straight to his father, but I can understand why he didn't. Poor kid still has a lot of insecurities.

    Author's Response: You will find out soon just who has that diary... Thanks for the continuous reviewing!
Title: Start of a New School Year 11 Dec 2007 7:36 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    It's good to see Hermione and Ron. I wonder if Alec will become friends with them, too, since he's already close to Lisa and Josh?

    Lockhart's quiz is just ridiculous, isn't it? Of course, the man himself is ridiculous so what can you expect?

    I'm glad Severus will give Alec and friends extra tutoring in Defense. I have a feeling they're gonna need it!

    Author's Response: The defense tutoring will certainly help since Lockhart won't be able to teach anything. :)
Title: Gilderoy Lockhart 11 Dec 2007 7:30 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter! Ugh, Lockhart. He's one of my least favorite people. I laughed when Asphodel chased him away.

    Oh, dear, looks like Alec and Draco are going to have problems. I have to say, though I know hitting is wrong, that I can't help but feel that Draco had it coming.

    And now, the school year is about to begin. It ought to be interesting!

    Author's Response: I really dont care for Lockhart either. He is quite annoying! Thanks for reviewing!
Title: What's Wrong with Snape? 10 Dec 2007 5:42 am
Reviewer: LindseySnape (Signed) [Report This]
    uhhh why did you have to leave it there??? That's just so wrong. That was an awesome chapter, I can't wait to find out what's wrong with Severus, I have no idea what's going on with him though. So please update soon and keep up the great work. LES

    Author's Response: I know its wrong to leave it there but I just couldn't resist! I will try to get that next chapter out soon!
Title: Dobby 19 Nov 2007 12:33 am
Reviewer: Elfwyn (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I really like Alec and his friends as well as Severus, however, using JKR's situations...Ginny with the diary, blah, blah, blah...gets really old and tiring. (Been done to death!) Try something new and refreshing to go with your unique and enjoyable characterizations.

    Author's Response: Your wish will be granted! You know why? Ginny isn't at Hogwarts this year because if you remember, Alec/Harry started school a year early so this is technically Ron's first year. Someone else will indeed have the diary...
Title: Dobby 18 Nov 2007 7:30 am
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    I am so glad to see an update.Alec and dad are fun to watch.

    Author's Response: Thank you for the review and more will be up again soon I hope!

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