A brilliant start to a much anticipated sequel. Harry crying "I wanna go home Daddy" was utterly heart-wrenching. So of course, I loved it.
You are officially my hero for writing a sequel so quickly. I almost squealed when I saw it...lol. This was really a great chapter! I like how you focused on the trust between Harry and Snape and the fact that Snape kept his promise to Harry, leaving exactly when he said he would from the Great Hall.
SO happy you put up the second one. This one is my favorite out off all.
Awesome job, can't wait for the update. ^^
yeah the sequel, it was an awesome first chapter. I'm really glad that Severus is not afraid to show Harry affection in front of the entire school, no matter what happens. Your food and sorting descriptions were great, and I can just picture the trouble that Harry and Charlie are going to manage to get themselves into. Keep up the great work and update again soon, eagerly awaiting more. LES
Excellent start! I'm very happy to see the sequel out already! Keep up the great writing!
| Title: Chapter 1
| 09 Sep 2007 1:20 am
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| Reviewer: JessieG (Anonymous)
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OOOH I love it! I had a bad day at work and comming home to find that you started the sequel just made my day a lot better.
Watch your grammer I found a few mistakes. Other then that AWESOME
I am THRILLED to see this sequel! A wonderful beginning. . . .so glad you are continuing this delightful story!
I loved that...........Snape is so cool. Looking forward to more... Thanks
| Title: Chapter 1
| 09 Sep 2007 12:27 am
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| Reviewer: Hilari (Anonymous)
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I am so glad you started book 2. I adore this story. You are the absolute best!
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