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Title: Chapter 7 09 Oct 2007 7:18 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Such a sweet chapter! I just love the image od Snape sitting by the fire reading to a cute sleepy Harry in his lap along with Treacle of course.
Title: Chapter 7 09 Oct 2007 5:43 am
Reviewer: Harriverse (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wonderful update. I guess Harry can go to school with the Weasley's as well.
Title: Chapter 7 09 Oct 2007 5:05 am
Reviewer: Caramello (Signed) [Report This]
    Hehe! Soothing voice. Haha. I'd never thought of that... *Swoons at the thought of Alan Rickman's voice, though*

    It really guts me everytime that Harry feels Severus is going to send him away. I just want it to get through to him, that he's okay, and not a nusance. I know, I know... that's the whole point of the story... but I don't know how much his heart - or mine - can take! ;)

    I'm loving the idea of Molly taking care of Harry during the days. He needs a loving woman like her in his life. *Squee*
Title: Chapter 7 09 Oct 2007 4:32 am
Reviewer: ScarlettPendragon (Signed) [Report This]
    Yes!! Severus gets it!! I'm so glad that Severus apologized to Harry, and reinforced the fact that Harry isn't a freak and that his abilities are a good and natural part of him - I especially liked the way Severus drew parallels between his own fairly rare abilities and Harry's, so that if Harry couldn't hate Severus gifts that his own gifts weren't bad either!!
    Really really great chapter - terrific job!!
    Scarlett
Title: Chapter 7 09 Oct 2007 1:58 am
Reviewer: cathyrf (Signed) [Report This]
    I can't decide which part was my favorite...Snape's heart to heart with Harry or Molly's heart to heart with Snape. Both parts were very touching!

    And wow, I am a parent and forgiving yourself for mistakes is so hard...very insightful writing.

    Looking forward to the next chapter.
Title: Chapter 7 09 Oct 2007 1:44 am
Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) [Report This]
    Such a emotional, sweet chapter. :) Poor Severus. It made my heart ache when he was trying so hard not to reach for Harry.

    By the way, do you have a cat? You describe a cat's actions so perfectly...lol.

    One thing: in the very beginning, did you mean to say that the cat lay on her back instead of her belly?

    Anyway, brilliant chapter. I loved it.

    Author's Response: Hi Jade, Thanks for the review!  Yes, I have a cat.  In fact, I have four.  Ack, FOUR!!  Pounce, Cimmerian, Loki and Groo.  Both Loki and Pounce like kipping on their backs in my arms, and making grabs at my hands, so I had Treacle do the same thing.  Pounce, in fact, will often reach up with one of his front paws and pat my cheek while he's curled in my arms; it's terribly cute.  Cuteness squared, really.  Maybe cubed.  Thanks again!
Title: Chapter 7 09 Oct 2007 1:41 am
Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) [Report This]
    Great parenting advice all the way through. Definately one of your best chapters.

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