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Reviews For Whelp II -- The Wrath of Snape
"She fixed it really well." "Yep." Father laughed softly and reached for his cup of coffee. "Finish your breakfast, silly imp." **Those lines made me smile. Actually, I smiled quite a few times as I read this chapter. I'm glad Harry isn't too ashamed. I was also happy to see a quick recovery. You've written the Weasleys well. Ginny is adorable, and she really hasn't even said much yet...lol. She's always been one of my favorite characters in HP. As for writing at work...I'm actually going to try that next week. I have parent-teacher conferences for the first time in my life, and between appointments, I'm going to force myself to write. Hopefully YOU don't have to work too often, so you can keep updating your wonderful stories :) A lovely chapter. Keep it up!
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