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Title: Chapter 16 16 Feb 2008 10:54 pm
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    I'M SO HAPPY YOU UPDATED! I LOVE this story, waiting so long for this chapter was pure torture. This chapter was very emotional, excellant work. Poor Harry and Severus, misunderstandings are rough. Sorry to hear about you having all that bad luck. PLEASE try to post again soon though!
Title: Chapter 16 16 Feb 2008 9:06 pm
Reviewer: Deco (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Poor Harry...poor Severus...and where's Tree while Harry's at school?

    Author's Response:

    Hi Deco,

    Tree will be outisde, playing and hunting, or in Severus' quarters.  Thanks for the review!

Title: Chapter 16 16 Feb 2008 7:29 pm
Reviewer: wynnleaf (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter. I loved Snape's frustration as he was delayed from going to Harry, and then that turning into fear and resignation when he thinks he's to be arrested, and then even greater fear as he thinks Sirius has escaped to kill Harry.
Title: Chapter 16 16 Feb 2008 7:27 pm
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, and I meant to say that I hope you feel better soon, and good luck with the new job!

    Author's Response: Thanks!
Title: Chapter 16 16 Feb 2008 7:25 pm
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter! I felt so bad for Harry and Severus. I could just feel Severus' frustration when Albus kept him from returning on time...as a parent, you want so much to keep promises to your children, but now and again circumstances get out of your control. Of course, that's hard for a young child to understand because parents are supposed to be all-powerful, to their mind anyway. And of course, Harry's past, with all its terrible abuse, just makes it so hard for him to trust anyone in the first place, and to believe that anyone could really want him.

    I feel sorry for the Weasleys too. Though Molly knew Harry has been abused, I'm not sure they really understood how damaged Harry is til now, and they've got to be feeling so helpless and out of their depth. I do hope they'll be able to help Severus and Harry, though.

    I can't wait to see where you go with the Sirius storyline. Is he innocent in your version? If so, that will really freak Severus out when he realises that Peter Pettigrew/Scabbers is the true danger. Good job on capturing the sense of panic and terror that everyone felt on the news of Sirius' escape.

    Author's Response:

    Hi Kristeh,

    You're absolutely right about Molly and the rest of the Weasleys.  Molly tries her best, and she knows good stuff about raising children, but she has never dealt with any child with Harry's level of damage. She will continue to be a good support for Severus, though.

    You wrote: I can't wait to see where you go with the Sirius storyline. Is he innocent in your version?

    Yes.  And yes, there will be trauma, drama and angst to go along with his introduction to this story, naturally.  ;-)  After all, he was named Harry's legal guardian by James, right?  Right?  (He doesn't know the truth about Harry's parentage yet, of course.)

    Thanks for your review!

    --rachel

Title: Chapter 16 16 Feb 2008 7:09 pm
Reviewer: Lunaz (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Sorry to hear about the problems you have been having but even with all of these issues you still managed to write a great chapter. That scene in the end when Snape finally came to Harry had me teary. Awesome update.
Title: Chapter 16 16 Feb 2008 4:52 pm
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    Hugs to both wee Harry and terrified Severus.

    That was a roller coaster ride - poor little Harry thinking he had been abandoned and poor Severus thinking that he was going to be arrested. Of course, if they had tried to arrest him, Severus would have blown up half of Hogwarts to get away and get Harry and himself to safety.

    Thank you and hope you are feeling better.

    Author's Response:

    You wrote:  Of course, if they had tried to arrest him, Severus would have blown up half of Hogwarts to get away and get Harry and himself to safety.

    Of course!  He will do anything and everything to protect his son.

    Thank you for your well wishes, and for your review!  

    --rachel


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