So it was Pettigrew! Grrrrr. Someone ought to feed him to an owl or use his spleen in a potion!
| Title: Chapter 18
| 02 May 2008 9:34 am
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| Reviewer: jpottermalfoy (Anonymous)
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I've just found your 'Whelp' series yesterday, and have just now finished with what you have written so far. These stories are wonderfully written! There have been many chapters where I've soaked tissues while reading about poor Harry.
Snape seems to be developing quite nicely as a new parent to a 7 year old child with, well, basically mental disabilities. Emotional disabilities at the very least. And considering that he was abused himself as a child, I think Snape is doing a very good job. I can't stand the stories where Snape all of a sudden knows how to be the perfect father/guardian to a disturbed Harry-it's very unrealistic. That might sound a bit funny, considering that the entire Harry Potter universe is actually fantasy, but for the most part fanfiction writers try for a realistic feel in their characters.
Thank you for writing such a wonderful story, and I hope you are able to update again soon.
its great to see another chapter! cant wait for more
great chapter, harry is having a fairly good time helping with potions and messing about at the burrow and hearing news from hogwarts is always good
| Title: Chapter 18
| 15 Apr 2008 10:27 pm
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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Yay!! An update! I liked the pleasant movement of this chapter. Though it was laced with tension, it moved smoothly and was very nice. I like that Harry isn't all terrified of the possibility of Sirius yet -- I really like that. He needs to be able to be a kid for once, lol.
Great job!
Good chapter! I'm happy you found time to update! I have a feeling something is going to happen soon so hopefully you will be able to update again soon!
Yay! A new chapter! :-)
OK, this one really played havoc with my heart.
It tightened with fear with the thought of the dementors near Hogwarts.
It jumped with joy at the thought of thw Weasley's accepting the Fidelius so readily to keep not only Harry but 'a former deatheater' safe.
It melted and sighed "ahhh" when Severus told Harry he had more important things to do than make potions.
And lastly it broke andmade me cry when it read "He had never had someone look proud of him before"
Thanks for the early morning cordio-calisthenics!
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