You've got us worried, now! PLEEZE, can we have another chapter soon, so we can find out what happens with Sirius?!
(In the meantime, hope your summer's going well!)
I LOVE this story and I am sorry that I don't always have the time to review properly. Severus is totally IC and at the same time a wonderful father. I really like the way you write!
great chapter i really enjoyed reading it, i hope severus can keep harry safe from sirius and i loved the way sirius interacted with the dursleys and glad the spell severus cast is still working well.
thanks for the lemonade and cookies, abit of bribary does help reviewers review
Excellent view of how Sirius might react in such a situation. Some other reviewer commented that your "unhinged" and somewhat "immature" Sirius was better than JKR's Sirius, but I think it *is* JKR's Sirius - quite in-character, in other words.
Can't wait to see what happens.
Seems like your Sirius has gone a bit mad. In a very interesting way. Cheers for that.
Update! Yeah!
Eagerly anticipating the next chapter.
(^_^)/
BEM
| Title: Chapter 19
| 25 Jun 2008 7:14 am
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| Reviewer: le skrewt (Anonymous)
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uh oh! i'm worried for snape now...
your portrayal of a slightly unhinged, immature Sirius is great, really much better than JKR's. he's obviously a little unhinged & completely unaware of that fact; he's not quite tracking ie. unable to come out with "4" every time he adds 2+2; and his irrational reaction to snape is perfectly done.
Great chapter! I like how this chapter was from Sirius' POV. Hope you can update again soon! :)
| Title: Chapter 19
| 25 Jun 2008 5:44 am
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| Reviewer: Deco (Anonymous)
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Sirius' POV was brilliant, most notably the Dursleys and the 'vely-tision'
Thank you for the pink lemonade and chocolate fudge brownie. They went along very well with the chapter. I'm on tenterhooks to see what happens next, though. Sirius is really---um, I think the word is obsessive---about Severus isn't he? And of course, is seeing everything that happens through a very biased point of view. Excellent characterization and descriptions. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
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