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Title: Chapter 22 14 Apr 2013 1:30 am
Reviewer: dropspun (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I am enjoying the "Whelp" universe enormously! I do not often read "kid fic", but this certainly sucked me into a universe where Harry was a child and Severus was his Father.

    The author portrayed the thought patterns, fears and reactions of an abused child perfectly, while still keeping the story within the bounds of "entertainment" -- after all, no one wants to go on reading when it is too dark!

    I am looking forward to more in this universe, and think jharad17 a highly skilled writer.
Title: Chapter 22 11 Oct 2009 9:00 pm
Reviewer: Barbara Holmes (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Thank you, thank you, thank you for this wonderful story! I am waiting eagerly for part three. :D
Title: Chapter 22 09 Sep 2008 6:58 pm
Reviewer: NaiveGhost (Signed) [Report This]
    Thanks for the update.
    Keep writing!
    ;-)
Title: Chapter 22 02 Sep 2008 5:14 am
Reviewer: Jill (Anonymous) [Report This]
    WOW you are doing awesome on this story i cant wait for you to write another chapter :) And i do hope you are feeling better :)

    Author's Response: Thank you-- for the review and the well wishes.
Title: Chapter 22 30 Aug 2008 4:47 am
Reviewer: skrwt (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Good rescue scene! Poor little Harry, peeing himself! So touching that Severus could heARr Harry's voice in his head. Wow, Sirius has really messed up big time here. I wonder what Severus ... and Albus... are going to do?? and what kind of treats Tree is going to get!

    Author's Response: Tree's gonna get some serious tuna treats!  And Sirius is going to get some serious help.  He's a bit broken, moreso than Harry is, right now.  Thanks for the review!
Title: Chapter 22 28 Aug 2008 8:54 pm
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    What a lovely chapter! I'm so proud of Harry for being able to articulate how he was treated by the Dursleys. He is a courageous kid, and it also shows how much Severus has helped him, too.

    I loved that Severus was able to hear Harry calling him through their bond and that Dumbledore knew where to go. The reunion between Harry and Severus was wonderful and I'm just so glad that they are together again.

    Poor Sirius though. He did mean well, though he went about it all wrong, but how awful for him to have to hear about how Harry has been mistreated so terribly. Now he has to accept that Severus is actually very good for Harry and is his father...we'll see how he does with that, but maybe it will help him that Harry explained how good Severus has been to him.

    I'm sorry that this story is nearly done, but if you have another part planned, that's excellent news!

    Author's Response: Hi Kristeh!  Yes, I have a Part Three planned . . . well, planned maybe putting it too strongly.  I have it in mind, maybe?  I still haven't decided who they'll be "In Search Of" but it'll come to me, I betcha.  Maybe it'll be "In Seach of Peter."  You know, to clear Sirius' name.  Dunno.  But thank you for your review, and yes, Sirius has a lot to deal with now, but in some small way, it was . . . cathartic for Harry that this happened.
Title: Chapter 22 28 Aug 2008 8:24 pm
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    That was great. I really don't want Sirius chopped into small pieces. Also, Peter needs to be found.

    But even if Sirius is proved innocent, they will be serving hot tea in hell before Severus lets him close to Harry.

    I so enjoy this.

    Author's Response:

    No hot tea in hell?  Hmm, what about Pomegranate lemonade?  (I have an original story set in Hell, where one of the characters (Adonis) is baking cookies and serving up Pomegranate lemonade . . . because it's funny.)  But I understand your point, and yes, it'll be a cold day, or at least, very chilly, before certain individuals are allowed near certain others.  But maybe Part three of the series (as I just mentioned above) will be "The Seach for Peter". 

    Thanks for reviewing!

Title: Chapter 22 28 Aug 2008 3:36 pm
Reviewer: iluvchocs (Signed) [Report This]
    Great job on this chapter; I really like the way Sirius finally starts listening, and huzzah for Harry being told the whole story behind his 'adoption'. I can't wait to find out what happens to Sirius :D

    Author's Response: Sirius is going to be facing a full on Snape Wrath before the day is through.  He may even live through it.  Thanks for reviewing!
Title: Chapter 22 28 Aug 2008 5:51 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay Harry is safe again! I'm glad he and Severus were reunited. I am curious to see what happens to Sirius next. Hope you can update again soon!

    Author's Response: Thanks!  I'm working on Better Be Slytherin! first, but I should get back to Whelp soon.
Title: Chapter 22 28 Aug 2008 4:09 am
Reviewer: Mysterious Jedi (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Really nice chapter. I do hope Sirius gets cleared and gets to be a friend/godfather to Harry. I've always loved Sirius.

    Author's Response: Yeah, Sirius can be kind of cool.  I'm not certain how close their relationship will be, but he will get to be part of Harry's life, in some way.  Thanks for reviewing!

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