Oh, it's good to see the Weasleys again. I'm having to laugh at all those children in Severus' quarters, although they are going outside, probably for the better part of the day. If I were Molly, I think I'd rather watch them outside than to try to keep all those kids contained indoors.
Loved the Harry/Severus interaction, too, and I can't wait for the next chapter!
| Title: Chapter 8
| 18 Oct 2007 6:37 am
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| Reviewer: Harriverse (Anonymous)
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Ah, domestic bliss. . . Will Severus survive the Weasley twins?
| Title: Chapter 8
| 18 Oct 2007 6:14 am
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| Reviewer: wolfawaken (Anonymous)
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I love your 1st story Whelp and had read what you had writen for Whelp II. I had cried,laugh and awww on these stories, so I say Thank you.
The nerve your work must have! Didn't they know you had other important things to be working on? Geez... ;)
My favorite moment in this chapter in when Severus calls Harry a silly imp. It made me actually aww outloud. I absolutely loved it :D The rest of the chapter was fantastic as well. What with the accidental magic and Ginny and the twins and Ron and everyone... I can't WAIT to see what kinds of things they'll get up to in the next couple of chapters, haha. How fun they would've been for little companions as a kid... Great, now I'm jealous of Harry, lol.
Awesome job!
| Title: Chapter 8
| 14 Oct 2007 3:02 am
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| Reviewer: Lady Julie Snape (Anonymous)
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::coos::
I love it! It's so adorable to see Sev keeping a close watch on his son. He acts calm and collected but beneath... there's a protective father waiting to pounce. ::grins::
Please, update when you can. I look forward to more.
Yours,
Lady Julie Snape.
With the twins added to the mix, havoc will surely occur! Keep up the super awesome writing! :)
Oh. That was different. "No, Father. It feels fine today. Madam Pomfrey fixed it real good."
"She fixed it really well."
"Yep."
Father laughed softly and reached for his cup of coffee. "Finish your breakfast, silly imp."
**Those lines made me smile. Actually, I smiled quite a few times as I read this chapter. I'm glad Harry isn't too ashamed. I was also happy to see a quick recovery. You've written the Weasleys well. Ginny is adorable, and she really hasn't even said much yet...lol. She's always been one of my favorite characters in HP.
As for writing at work...I'm actually going to try that next week. I have parent-teacher conferences for the first time in my life, and between appointments, I'm going to force myself to write. Hopefully YOU don't have to work too often, so you can keep updating your wonderful stories :)
A lovely chapter. Keep it up!
i loved your chapter ! and your comment too, because it was just the same for me this week : i couldn't writte a chapter as I had to really work at work : how stupid is that ? ;-)
| Title: Chapter 7
| 13 Oct 2007 11:04 am
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| Reviewer: Mango (Anonymous)
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Whoo! Snape is so cute. xD
| Title: Chapter 7
| 12 Oct 2007 9:28 am
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| Reviewer: Myrrdin (Anonymous)
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I can't wait for the next chapter. When I saw the 'To be continued...' I literally thought, 'Oh, no! Not another to be continued!' It was quite funny, really. I love this story. I loved the first, too, but I knew there was a sequel and couldn't wait to read it. Poor little Harry. -huggles him- And poor Sev; he sure has his hands full. Keep up the amazing job, dear!
~Myrrdin
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