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Reviews For Whelp II -- The Wrath of Snape
Best regards, Jonathan
Molly and Severus' talk was very good, too, and I think it will be the right thing for Harry to be able to spend some time with the Weasleys and for Molly to watch him. Sounds like a good deal all around. Looking forward to more!
Anyway, I knew I liked those Weaseys. Thanks
It really guts me everytime that Harry feels Severus is going to send him away. I just want it to get through to him, that he's okay, and not a nusance. I know, I know... that's the whole point of the story... but I don't know how much his heart - or mine - can take! ;) I'm loving the idea of Molly taking care of Harry during the days. He needs a loving woman like her in his life. *Squee*
Really really great chapter - terrific job!! Scarlett
And wow, I am a parent and forgiving yourself for mistakes is so hard...very insightful writing. Looking forward to the next chapter.
By the way, do you have a cat? You describe a cat's actions so perfectly...lol. One thing: in the very beginning, did you mean to say that the cat lay on her back instead of her belly? Anyway, brilliant chapter. I loved it. Author's Response: Hi Jade, Thanks for the review! Yes, I have a cat. In fact, I have four. Ack, FOUR!! Pounce, Cimmerian, Loki and Groo. Both Loki and Pounce like kipping on their backs in my arms, and making grabs at my hands, so I had Treacle do the same thing. Pounce, in fact, will often reach up with one of his front paws and pat my cheek while he's curled in my arms; it's terribly cute. Cuteness squared, really. Maybe cubed. Thanks again! |
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