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Reviews For Whelp II -- The Wrath of Snape
I would really like to see Harry receive some psychiatric care. He's definitely been in need of it, and if he has any chance of leading light-hearted life (as much as HE can anyway, lol), I think it's prudent he get some. From personal experience - tramatizing events at the age of 5-7 WILL affect him later in life... and quite possibly all througout his teen years especially. But, of course this is your story, and I know you'll do what's best for your Harry :) Can't wait for more!
It's just that being a parent is new to him; under the best of circumstances, anyone would make some mistakes. And even though we don't know much about your Severus' past, I have the impression that it was unhappy, that he always had trouble relating to people and now he's the primary caretaker for a very needy and damaged child. Of course he's not going to be perfect. This doesn't mean that my heart doesn't break for poor little Harry. He is just so sweet and so good, and he tries so hard and still suffers so much--I think Severus just needs to quit teaching and stay home so he can love and cuddle Harry all day. I'm not sure what they'd do about having money for food and other basic necessities, but I'm sure Dumbledore could arrange something. I had to grin at how Severus let his remorse and worry and guilt morph into anger at his students (it's really not funny, I suppose, but I still had to smile). I bet the students will never forget that Potions class. And it was good of Madame Pomfrey to stay with Harry and even to lecture Severus--he does need to find someone who can adequately supervise Harry, yet still understand Harry's fragile state. Hmm, sounds like Molly Weasley would be perfect for the job, and Harry would have playmates and someone who could teach him his lessons, too!
i've been waiting for this chapter FOREVER finally - severus realizes that he's hurting harry! SOB - i need more!
I was on the verge of tears with Harry! That poor baby boy! Severus really does need to do more but he loves his son - I can see it by the way you write. Can't wait to see what else happens and when Sev becomes super protective father. Does Harry get kidnapped by Malfoy or someone? How does Severus find out? Please udpate when you can, I'm really looking forward to reading. Yours, Lady Julie Snape.
You write very well.
You're going to have your work cut out for you, fixing the damage you've done. *Please* update soon, this chapter is killing me.
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