Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Chapter 7 09 Oct 2007 1:41 am
Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) [Report This]
    Great parenting advice all the way through. Definately one of your best chapters.
Title: Chapter 6 02 Oct 2007 5:57 am
Reviewer: Caramello (Signed) [Report This]
    Severus making mistakes? Never! ;) It's good to see him being so human, sometimes. And Harry with his incredible pain tolerance! I mean, wow. I broke my toes when I was in high school, and I remember waking up in the middle of the night from intense pain, when I had wrapped the bandages too tightly... I couldn't even imagine how badly it would hurt, and for how long, before going numb *Shudders*.

    I would really like to see Harry receive some psychiatric care. He's definitely been in need of it, and if he has any chance of leading light-hearted life (as much as HE can anyway, lol), I think it's prudent he get some. From personal experience - tramatizing events at the age of 5-7 WILL affect him later in life... and quite possibly all througout his teen years especially. But, of course this is your story, and I know you'll do what's best for your Harry :)

    Can't wait for more!
Title: Chapter 6 02 Oct 2007 5:47 am
Reviewer: Arwensong (Signed) [Report This]
    This was heartbreaking to read, which is a testament to your fine writing. I feel so anxious for Harry and Severus! I know what it is like to be a working parent...tough to find good house elves! II do hope he doesn't choose that prefect Rose though, I don't trust her). I do hope he gets good help soon. The stress is getting to me. Everyone needs more hugs! Great work!
Title: Chapter 6 02 Oct 2007 5:18 am
Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh rats, I was hoping to see the apologies. Well, the dressing down was pretty good, too. Great insight into Snape's adjustment to parenthood.
Title: Chapter 6 02 Oct 2007 5:01 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    As annoyed as I was with Severus at the end of the last chapter, I can't help but feel sorry for him now--he really does love Harry tremendously.

    It's just that being a parent is new to him; under the best of circumstances, anyone would make some mistakes. And even though we don't know much about your Severus' past, I have the impression that it was unhappy, that he always had trouble relating to people and now he's the primary caretaker for a very needy and damaged child. Of course he's not going to be perfect.

    This doesn't mean that my heart doesn't break for poor little Harry. He is just so sweet and so good, and he tries so hard and still suffers so much--I think Severus just needs to quit teaching and stay home so he can love and cuddle Harry all day. I'm not sure what they'd do about having money for food and other basic necessities, but I'm sure Dumbledore could arrange something.

    I had to grin at how Severus let his remorse and worry and guilt morph into anger at his students (it's really not funny, I suppose, but I still had to smile). I bet the students will never forget that Potions class.

    And it was good of Madame Pomfrey to stay with Harry and even to lecture Severus--he does need to find someone who can adequately supervise Harry, yet still understand Harry's fragile state.

    Hmm, sounds like Molly Weasley would be perfect for the job, and Harry would have playmates and someone who could teach him his lessons, too!
Title: Chapter 6 02 Oct 2007 4:12 am
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    ooooh! why did you have to stop here!
    i've been waiting for this chapter FOREVER
    finally - severus realizes that he's hurting harry!
    SOB - i need more!
Title: Chapter 6 02 Oct 2007 12:56 am
Reviewer: Lady Julie Snape (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh if the Dursleys weren't being dealt with as we speak...

    I was on the verge of tears with Harry! That poor baby boy! Severus really does need to do more but he loves his son - I can see it by the way you write. Can't wait to see what else happens and when Sev becomes super protective father. Does Harry get kidnapped by Malfoy or someone? How does Severus find out?

    Please udpate when you can, I'm really looking forward to reading.

    Yours,
    Lady Julie Snape.
Title: Chapter 5 29 Sep 2007 10:49 pm
Reviewer: rosemaryeve (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Lovely story, I am enjoying this tremendously, and I also enjoyed Whelp.

    You write very well.
Title: Chapter 5 28 Sep 2007 2:32 pm
Reviewer: lyra (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, Severus, you foolish, foolish man.

    You're going to have your work cut out for you, fixing the damage you've done.

    *Please* update soon, this chapter is killing me.
Title: Chapter 5 28 Sep 2007 9:45 am
Reviewer: JMGodfreyIII (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Aw poor Harry : (

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