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Reviews For Whelp II -- The Wrath of Snape
I was afraid of the problems with Charlie. He's a great kid, but he is very busy with his schoolwork, and he has friends his own age who might not want a little kid hanging around. Perhaps Ron could come and play with Harry again soon. Maybe this has been mentioned and I've just forgotten, but what about Harry's own lessons? Once he's busy studying he won't have so much time to be lonely or get into mischief (although being Harry, I'm sure he'll find some time for mischief, too). Is this Rose Parkinson that met up with Harry? Poor kid's hurt again--hopefully Severus can fix that ankle again.
hehe, and it's hilarious imagining the reactions of everybody as harry amiably chats it out with a snake, isn't it?! lol...
Author's Response: So, did Snape decide to keep her because she tried to protect Harry or because she could pull him out of his flashback when he could not? Yes. Thanks for the review!
On a happier note, Treacle Tart is the cutest name ever, and I'm glad Harry has a pet. He needs something that he can care for, and play with, and keep himself occupied while his father is teaching. And Treacle Tart can keep an eye out for him, too. It was great of Severus to give in and allow Harry to keep her. The first day of school is always tiring, and I think it's worse for teachers than students, but of course he saw what was best for Harry. Looking forward to more!
The Fidelity Draught sounds interesting, but I feel like something somehow, is not going to work out the way it should. I can really feel for Severus here, torn between his duties as a parent and his duties as a professor and Head of House. It's hard sometimes, but of course Harry is his top priority. I'm glad Severus is so loving and protective of him. Harry really needs that now. I hope he will come to feel safe at Hogwarts.
thanks! Author's Response: (why you not write also a severitus? You would do certainly a masterpiece). I might, eventually. First, I'll want to finish at least one more of the three I have currently going, though. And I'd also need a fresh twist on it, so it wouldn't be like all the others out there . . . if anyone has any ideas, let me know! Thanks for the review! |
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