yeah the sequel, it was an awesome first chapter. I'm really glad that Severus is not afraid to show Harry affection in front of the entire school, no matter what happens. Your food and sorting descriptions were great, and I can just picture the trouble that Harry and Charlie are going to manage to get themselves into. Keep up the great work and update again soon, eagerly awaiting more. LES
Excellent start! I'm very happy to see the sequel out already! Keep up the great writing!
| Title: Chapter 1
| 09 Sep 2007 1:20 am
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| Reviewer: JessieG (Anonymous)
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OOOH I love it! I had a bad day at work and comming home to find that you started the sequel just made my day a lot better.
Watch your grammer I found a few mistakes. Other then that AWESOME
I am THRILLED to see this sequel! A wonderful beginning. . . .so glad you are continuing this delightful story!
I loved that...........Snape is so cool. Looking forward to more... Thanks
| Title: Chapter 1
| 09 Sep 2007 12:27 am
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| Reviewer: Hilari (Anonymous)
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I am so glad you started book 2. I adore this story. You are the absolute best!
| Title: Chapter 1
| 09 Sep 2007 12:16 am
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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awesome! I hope you update soon :D
| Title: Chapter 1
| 08 Sep 2007 11:41 pm
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| Reviewer: JMGodfreyIII (Anonymous)
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Yay! the long awaited sequel is here, well we didnt really wait all that long did we ^__^
If Sev winked at me I think I'd die XD
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| 08 Sep 2007 11:38 pm
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| Reviewer: Rachel (Raz for short) (Anonymous)
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I love it!
I also think Harry should be let to fly a broom stick!
Oooh, I just typed a nice long review and then my computer ate it. Let me try this again.
Yay! The sequel is here! I was so excited to see the Opening Feast. There's nothing like the start of a new year at Hogwarts. Whatever else it may be, you know it's going to be exciting.
It's good to see Charlie Weasley again, but I hope Harry isn't going to be disappointed. Charlie is a good kid and I'm sure he'll be willing to spend some time with Harry, but he'll be busy with classes and will probably want to spend time with friends his own age, too.
So Harry is interested in dragons, still. Well, that's something he and Hagrid have in common, although if Hagrid had his way, they'd find out more about dragons than they bargained for, I think.
Poor Harry for being nervous for the first-years about to be Sorted. In his experiences, bad things are quite common. After all, he was with the Dursleys for years and has only been with his father for a few weeks.
It's great to see Snape being so protective and loving, though. He's a great dad here, in spite of his insecurities. I wonder if he'll still his mean snarky self in Potions class now. It might be a little tougher to intimidate students now that they've seen him cuddling little Harry. I'm sure Snape could have them quaking in their boots with a little effort though.
And the food sounded yummy. I was getting hungry just reading about it.
And then Filch had to spoil it all. I'd definitely keep a close eye on Harry if I were Snape. Filch is the type to hold a grudge, even if the confrontation between him and Harry was all his own fault. He sounds like he's looking for revenge.
I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
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