Im so glad that Minerva is being proactive, though I’m concerned about what Dumbledore might do about it.
| Title: Chapter 2
| 13 Oct 2008 1:14 am
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| Reviewer: Muggle49 (Anonymous)
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Well developed, really keeps your interest. Thanks for your hard work
I am very impressed by this story and glad that you are able to keep everyone in character. I was a little confused when I read the reviews just now at some people's reference to a chapter 20...and then I decided to check fanfiction.net and voila! I didn't know that you were updating there too! This makes me really excited, I get to keep reading! I am really glad that you did keep the abuse from the Dursleys to a minimum compared to some fanfics. At times, the greater level of abuse is necessary but here, everyting is perfect! I can't wait to see who this dashing wizard-in-disguise is...although I doubt that it's Snape, it didn't seem like him at all. You should continue to update here too, as all of my fanfic friends prefer potionsandsnitches to fanfiction.net (and me too for that matter.) But, great job and keep going!
Author's Response: Thanks! I will continue to post here. . .I love this site.
I've just read through both stories, and I'm impressed. You've done a great job keeping everyone in character even through an AU. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thank you for your kind words. I really like both characters and don't want them to change too terribly much.
"He was suddenly very glad he wasn't the one on the receiving end of the daunting witch's barely suppressed wrath."
I loved that line! I certainly would not want an angry Minerva after me. All of the characterization were really good in this chapter. I normally like to give constructive criticism, but I was having trouble looking for anything! The only thing I could find was period verses comma in dialogue. In some cases, a period was in the place of what should have been a comma. You have to really pay close attention to the tag. Most people would not notice it though, so you decide whether it is worth fixing. I love the story! I look forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time to review. I'm glad you're enjoying it.
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