I love the guild and their cloak and dagger ways. All of their preparations seem comprehensive, so hopefully nothing derails their plans. I love the detail st the end!
Since you'd mentioned Harry's album of pictures hidden under the floorboards in the previous chapter, I was surprised when you didn't include them here. It seemed like Harry should've mentioned it when Snape asked him "Anything else?"
(By the way--good chapter!)
| Title: Chapter 14
| 14 Oct 2008 9:58 pm
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| Reviewer: Deco (Anonymous)
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Oh, I hope that having this chapter uploaded to this site means that you are working on this wonderful story again. I must admit that in this chapter I especially liked Flitwick. He must be formidable in charms, but he is so often presented in a humorous light rather than as the marvel he would be with a wand. As always, I love your Harry and Severus.
Ooh, I just love when Snape thumbs his nose up at Dumbledore. But he is going to be in BIG trouble, as they other professors are, if Dumbledore ever finds out! Eeks!
It is so sweet that Harry is able to see another side of Snape. Can't wait for the next update! :)
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