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Title: Chapter 15 05 Jun 2022 1:31 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    I’m enjoying all the subterfuge. I love the punishment inflicted on the Dursleys.
Title: Chapter 15 09 Jul 2019 3:46 pm
Reviewer: ARim (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you So Much for a beguiling story- made me grin at Harry's protest against Draco Malfoy-elegance. He would.
    And Snape's 1960's upbringing wanting to evolve upwards, away from the wants of wartime rationing. Well spotted.
    Britain was harshly rationed for a long time. Elizabeth David's cookbooks describe it.
    To fellow-readers, there are more chapters in this saga over on ffnet under the same title.
    I hope that it will eventually be completed, as Severus' hidden warmth and perfectionism, Harry's unfolding, and the other teachers' plotting (Yay!) against the icy cruelty of AD. (shivering) is wonderful to read again and again.
Title: Chapter 15 29 Jul 2009 12:32 am
Reviewer: cckeimig (Signed) [Report This]
    I absolutely LOVE the punishment for the Dursleys. Wow! Over ten years of it!! Brilliant!
Title: Chapter 15 17 Oct 2008 7:35 pm
Reviewer: trust severus spy (Signed) [Report This]
    Dammit, I had written a LOVELY review, but it got lost somehow, when the evil wizards in the ether mischievously removed my sign-in, and POOF!
    Well, let me give you the "10" you so richly deserve here, and I'll try to reproduce what I'd written.

    I REALLY LOVED the second half especially, with Flitwick and McGonagall! Your throwaway line, "...the rumored sightings of Irma Pince and Argus Filch, reportedly observed sharing a cozy tryst at Madam Puddifoot's the previous weekend", was deliciously funny!
    Who knew the giant squid had such a weakness for toast? Delightful! And I relished the phrase: "...shared the languid task of tossing the treats to the nearest glistening wet tentacle that trembled in squelchy anticipation."
    Delicious writing! Keep it up!
Title: Chapter 15 16 Oct 2008 6:29 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Ooh, excellent! Evil revenge--I love it!!

    You have an evil mind--you're my kind of writer! ;)
Title: Chapter 15 16 Oct 2008 2:08 am
Reviewer: Deco (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Another splendid chapter, capped off with the toast-loving squid, a great touch.
Title: Chapter 15 16 Oct 2008 1:42 am
Reviewer: writeurlife (Signed) [Report This]
    ... i feel bad for dudley. like, i know he was cruel and everything, but he's also only twelve years old. people can change if their raise changes.

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