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Reviews For Evolution
And Snape's 1960's upbringing wanting to evolve upwards, away from the wants of wartime rationing. Well spotted. Britain was harshly rationed for a long time. Elizabeth David's cookbooks describe it. To fellow-readers, there are more chapters in this saga over on ffnet under the same title. I hope that it will eventually be completed, as Severus' hidden warmth and perfectionism, Harry's unfolding, and the other teachers' plotting (Yay!) against the icy cruelty of AD. (shivering) is wonderful to read again and again.
Well, let me give you the "10" you so richly deserve here, and I'll try to reproduce what I'd written. I REALLY LOVED the second half especially, with Flitwick and McGonagall! Your throwaway line, "...the rumored sightings of Irma Pince and Argus Filch, reportedly observed sharing a cozy tryst at Madam Puddifoot's the previous weekend", was deliciously funny! Who knew the giant squid had such a weakness for toast? Delightful! And I relished the phrase: "...shared the languid task of tossing the treats to the nearest glistening wet tentacle that trembled in squelchy anticipation." Delicious writing! Keep it up!
You have an evil mind--you're my kind of writer! ;)
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