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Title: Chapter 17 27 Oct 2008 5:38 pm
Reviewer: Kirinin (Signed) [Report This]
    Erm... I meant four weeks. Obviously. ;)

    -K
Title: Chapter 17 27 Oct 2008 4:06 pm
Reviewer: Kirinin (Signed) [Report This]
    Very good! I like your version of Harry and Snape.

    Many authors who write stories of this stripe choose to make Snape the only reasonable adult in a sea of stupidity or indifference. I'm glad you chose instead to make *all* of the teachers as concerned for Harry as Severus is. It seems much more probable your way, in that Dumbledore appears to be the odd man out.

    I would, however, take it into consideration that what the Professors are doing is highly illegal. *All* of them could easily lose their jobs. While I understand that they might proceed anyway, this possibility should be taken into account, mentioned more than a vague 'we could get in trouble'. Severus is basically guilty of kidnapping. He could go to Azkaban. Where would Harry be then?

    I think about this because I am in a similar situation with a student of mine right now. I imagine what would happen if I decided to spirit her away for four months and hope no-one noticed. I imagine it would not go well.

    Of course, I don't have magic on my side, but still...
Title: Chapter 17 26 Oct 2008 5:07 am
Reviewer: trust severus spy (Signed) [Report This]
    What an entertaining story! I really enjoy your vision of Snape and Harry. This is coming along quite nicely.
    A very minor correction: It's 'either/or - neither/nor'. So when Snape is asking Harry what disguise he wishes to keep to, 'or' should be changed to 'nor' in: "No one has seen us yet, except for Mercup, of course, and he will neither care nor comment if we change."
Title: Chapter 17 26 Oct 2008 5:00 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Hmm," Little Master"! Too funny!

    I just love Mercup, she sounds so cute. Oh wait, he or she? No matter, love the story!
Title: Chapter 17 26 Oct 2008 5:00 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Hmm," Little Master"! Too funny!

    I just love Mercup, she sounds so cute. Oh wait, he or she? No matter, love the story!
Title: Chapter 17 26 Oct 2008 5:00 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Hmm," Little Master"! Too funny!

    I just love Mercup, she sounds so cute. Oh wait, he or she? No matter, love the story!

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