Potions and Snitches
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Title: Chapter 6 24 Oct 2015 6:18 am
Reviewer: aurtrina (Signed) [Report This]
    I like that you have more than just Snape worrying about Harry's home life.
Title: Chapter 17 24 Apr 2014 8:56 pm
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh.... '
    Continue next week, fortnight, month,
    Please!!!!!!!!!
    8+++++, (because it hasn't been updated , grumble, grouse complain, whine, etc. etc.)
Title: Chapter 13 24 Apr 2014 8:11 pm
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    God, double dealings, sadness and mayhem.
    Well written, ugh, tense!
Title: Chapter 10 24 Apr 2014 7:51 pm
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    One of my favourite sentences: "..you are so very sweet when you blush, Severus."
    Do, Please, do continue writing this wonderful tale. Please Update. Are you on fanfiction, as well?
    A protective Snape is a wonderful being to see.
Title: Chapter 17 10 Mar 2014 9:36 am
Reviewer: waytomoon (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Dear Twinheart;

    Excellent work. I love a well-written story. As most of your followers we are dying for the story to continue and hope that one day you will come back to us and finish it since it is worth the wait.
Title: Chapter 13 31 Jan 2013 4:01 am
Reviewer: Me May (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Dear Albus Dumbledore,

    Having read your inner monologue, allow me to cordially inform you that I never, ever wish to read it again.
    It is extremely creepy and more than a little terrifying. Your plan, frankly, has several distressingly predatory overtones of *grooming* and you should never have been allowed near anyone, let alone anyone under twenty.
    As the Harry Potter universe is fictional, any hypothetical children of mine will never have the dubious pleasure of attending your school. And if I *were* a part of the Potterverse,I would gladly send my children to Beauxbatons or some other reputable school. Well, that's a lie, I'd hate to spend ten months of the year away from my children, but you get the idea.
    It pleases me that your staff are subverting your intentions, and I hope you get your comeuppance for being complicit in child abuse. I also hope your staff don't suffer for their actions, illegal though they are.
    You are a horrible, horrible person; and the worst part is, I can very nearly almost see why you acted as you did. With Severus. Initially. All your actions after that have been appalling. And honestly, ring of madness.
    You and Voldemort really aren't so different.

    Me May

    Dear author,

    Congratulations on writing such a scary POV so well. The above letter details why it is.
    Generally, this is a very good chapter, and story, and I just wish that it wasn't dead.
    Any hopes for it continuing?
Title: Chapter 17 03 Jul 2011 6:35 am
Reviewer: Alex (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I truly hope you continue this story one day because it is absolutely brilliant!!
Title: Chapter 17 31 Jan 2011 8:36 pm
Reviewer: p_stotts (Signed) [Report This]
    I have really enjoyed both this story and its prequel. I was sorry to reach the end and see that you haven't posted a new chapter in over 2 years. Any chance of you finishing this great story?
Title: Chapter 17 01 Jan 2011 4:08 pm
Reviewer: elizzza (Signed) [Report This]
    I really hope nothing has happened to you. I noticed that you haven't answered any reviews for quite some time but hope that you will eventually be able to write more on this story, which is excellent.
Title: Chapter 9 15 Dec 2010 3:17 am
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hullo. I read this story over on ff.net and saw it here and just had to reread it. I just wanted to make a small suggestion. The first time I read this chapter I had a very hard time remembering the conversation between Minerva and Poppy that McGonagall refers to Snape. Perhaps reminding the reader either through dialogue in the story or an a/n at the beginning of the chapter, telling where the reader can find the conversation in the previous story, would be helpful.

    Thank you for sharing your story with the fandom, this is one of my all time favs.

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