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Reviews For Evolution
Continue next week, fortnight, month, Please!!!!!!!!! 8+++++, (because it hasn't been updated , grumble, grouse complain, whine, etc. etc.)
Well written, ugh, tense!
Do, Please, do continue writing this wonderful tale. Please Update. Are you on fanfiction, as well? A protective Snape is a wonderful being to see.
Excellent work. I love a well-written story. As most of your followers we are dying for the story to continue and hope that one day you will come back to us and finish it since it is worth the wait.
Having read your inner monologue, allow me to cordially inform you that I never, ever wish to read it again. It is extremely creepy and more than a little terrifying. Your plan, frankly, has several distressingly predatory overtones of *grooming* and you should never have been allowed near anyone, let alone anyone under twenty. As the Harry Potter universe is fictional, any hypothetical children of mine will never have the dubious pleasure of attending your school. And if I *were* a part of the Potterverse,I would gladly send my children to Beauxbatons or some other reputable school. Well, that's a lie, I'd hate to spend ten months of the year away from my children, but you get the idea. It pleases me that your staff are subverting your intentions, and I hope you get your comeuppance for being complicit in child abuse. I also hope your staff don't suffer for their actions, illegal though they are. You are a horrible, horrible person; and the worst part is, I can very nearly almost see why you acted as you did. With Severus. Initially. All your actions after that have been appalling. And honestly, ring of madness. You and Voldemort really aren't so different. Me May Dear author, Congratulations on writing such a scary POV so well. The above letter details why it is. Generally, this is a very good chapter, and story, and I just wish that it wasn't dead. Any hopes for it continuing?
Thank you for sharing your story with the fandom, this is one of my all time favs. |
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