| Title: Chapter 17
| 29 Jun 2010 12:32 am
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| Reviewer: dorothy (Anonymous)
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thanks so much for your work on this story, it's great!!! it would be awesome if you could finish it, i want to know what happens next!
| Title: Chapter 17
| 08 Nov 2009 5:37 pm
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| Reviewer: harryphila (Anonymous)
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Hi,
i really like you stories! So Snape has a alter ego just in case he has to disappear for good? What is he going to do when Harry becomes friends with the kids of the Muggles who take care of the farm? Is any one of them magical - after all, their uncle was? And will Dumbledore realize Harry is away from Privet Drive? Not to mention that Harry in intent on telling Ron and Hermione about staying with Snape during the holidays...
Please update!!!!
I absolutely LOVE the punishment for the Dursleys. Wow! Over ten years of it!! Brilliant!
Oh I just love this part of the story! When the team of Powerful Good Guys comes to rescue - that's just gorgeous!
Just found this story and am really enjoying it. Please continue soon!
Erm... I meant four weeks. Obviously. ;)
-K
Very good! I like your version of Harry and Snape.
Many authors who write stories of this stripe choose to make Snape the only reasonable adult in a sea of stupidity or indifference. I'm glad you chose instead to make *all* of the teachers as concerned for Harry as Severus is. It seems much more probable your way, in that Dumbledore appears to be the odd man out.
I would, however, take it into consideration that what the Professors are doing is highly illegal. *All* of them could easily lose their jobs. While I understand that they might proceed anyway, this possibility should be taken into account, mentioned more than a vague 'we could get in trouble'. Severus is basically guilty of kidnapping. He could go to Azkaban. Where would Harry be then?
I think about this because I am in a similar situation with a student of mine right now. I imagine what would happen if I decided to spirit her away for four months and hope no-one noticed. I imagine it would not go well.
Of course, I don't have magic on my side, but still...
What an entertaining story! I really enjoy your vision of Snape and Harry. This is coming along quite nicely.
A very minor correction: It's 'either/or - neither/nor'. So when Snape is asking Harry what disguise he wishes to keep to, 'or' should be changed to 'nor' in: "No one has seen us yet, except for Mercup, of course, and he will neither care nor comment if we change."
Hmm," Little Master"! Too funny!
I just love Mercup, she sounds so cute. Oh wait, he or she? No matter, love the story!
Hmm," Little Master"! Too funny!
I just love Mercup, she sounds so cute. Oh wait, he or she? No matter, love the story!
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