Hmm," Little Master"! Too funny!
I just love Mercup, she sounds so cute. Oh wait, he or she? No matter, love the story!
Title: Chapter 16
| 20 Oct 2008 12:38 am
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Reviewer: writeurlife (Anonymous)
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probably not.. vernon's soulless as it is.. in all honesty, though, i think that's kind of sickening.
Title: Chapter 16
| 20 Oct 2008 12:19 am
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Reviewer: fanficaholic (Anonymous)
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Great story! Can't wait for more!
Title: Chapter 16
| 19 Oct 2008 11:21 pm
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Reviewer: Deco (Anonymous)
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Great last line; great chapter.
Oh I love this story, I'm so pleased that you updated. Will Snape eventually get permanant custody?
I guess that you can't tell me that, can you? Hee hee!
Please update soon. I can't wait to see what happens next!
Dammit, I had written a LOVELY review, but it got lost somehow, when the evil wizards in the ether mischievously removed my sign-in, and POOF! Well, let me give you the "10" you so richly deserve here, and I'll try to reproduce what I'd written.
I REALLY LOVED the second half especially, with Flitwick and McGonagall! Your throwaway line, "...the rumored sightings of Irma Pince and Argus Filch, reportedly observed sharing a cozy tryst at Madam Puddifoot's the previous weekend", was deliciously funny! Who knew the giant squid had such a weakness for toast? Delightful! And I relished the phrase: "...shared the languid task of tossing the treats to the nearest glistening wet tentacle that trembled in squelchy anticipation." Delicious writing! Keep it up!
Ooh, excellent! Evil revenge--I love it!!
You have an evil mind--you're my kind of writer! ;)
Since you'd mentioned Harry's album of pictures hidden under the floorboards in the previous chapter, I was surprised when you didn't include them here. It seemed like Harry should've mentioned it when Snape asked him "Anything else?" (By the way--good chapter!)
Title: Chapter 15
| 16 Oct 2008 2:08 am
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Reviewer: Deco (Anonymous)
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Another splendid chapter, capped off with the toast-loving squid, a great touch.
... i feel bad for dudley. like, i know he was cruel and everything, but he's also only twelve years old. people can change if their raise changes.
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