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Title: One More Such Victory 18 Sep 2007 6:09 am
Reviewer: Arwensong (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful work with this story! This is a conversation that I really missed from DH and you've done a beautiful job in remedying the omission. It provides closure, if Severus had to die, that is, which I still don't accept. But if he did, let there have been this scene!
Title: One More Such Victory 17 Sep 2007 5:04 pm
Reviewer: akblake (Signed) [Report This]
    From the summary I was cringing thinking you were killing off Snape (a la end of HBP) as 'Harry gets revenge', but this reconciliation was tear-worthy :) Well done.
Title: One More Such Victory 16 Sep 2007 10:31 am
Reviewer: Trekker2002 (Signed) [Report This]
    Absolutely necessary and JKR should have written such a chapter. So thank you for taking it on and doing it so beautifully.

    "Perfect detachment was—not possible."

    That was just so 'Snape'.
Title: One More Such Victory 16 Sep 2007 3:55 am
Reviewer: Sisyphus (Signed) [Report This]
    That was beautiful and perfect! ;)
Title: One More Such Victory 16 Sep 2007 1:46 am
Reviewer: Delaine (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Really lovely. Thanks for sharing.
Title: One More Such Victory 15 Sep 2007 8:46 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Great! I loved the image of Snape first appearing, pointed black leather boots... lovely imagery in this. I enjoyed the closure this gave after Deathly Hallows. Good job!
Title: One More Such Victory 15 Sep 2007 6:46 pm
Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) [Report This]
    What a lovely story. Thanks for sharing it :)

    I had a bit of an empty feeling after finishing DH, especially concerning Harry and Snape. If something like this would have been included, it would have made me feel a bit better. I guess that's what fanfic is for, huh? lol.

    I really loved this line:

    "I watched you...so closely....for so many years." He gives a little shrug. "Perfect detachment was—not possible."


    Again, great story! *adds to favorites*
Title: One More Such Victory 15 Sep 2007 6:21 pm
Reviewer: curlybean (Signed) [Report This]
    My goodness, woman. Have I told you lately that you are my hero? Everything you write is just flippin' brilliant. I just got home from work, after working 12 long, hard hours, and decided to see if you had updated "The Poor of God". Instead, I found this. Now, I'm going to have to go to bed with a stuffy nose, because of all the crying I did while reading this. I think Snape's "Well done, Harry" just about did me in.

    Anyway, I loved it, loved it, loved it. It was so satisfyingly beautiful in so many ways. Thanks...
Title: One More Such Victory 15 Sep 2007 5:08 pm
Reviewer: Sweartoad (Signed) [Report This]
    YAY. Yeah. I think I read this on your LJ or something, except it seems as though I come down with this awful disease called LAZY whenever I'm faced with a story that isn't on PotionsandSnitches. So yeah.

    "Snape's nod is faint, almost imperceptible. "Mostly."

    SNAPEY - if you weren't dead and like eaten by a big snake then I would totally hug you XD I reckon that this story is soooo plausible, especially after the whole "Look ... at ... me ..." bit at the end when he dies.

    "Goodbye, then," says Harry. "I hope you...rest peacefully, and all that."

    HARRY - you are cute. I'm glad he's still awkward and all that (I don't think I spelled awkward wrong but whatever it's midnight and spelling and grammar only work during daylight hours XD) because I've read SOOO many stories where it's all like Mkay Harry defeated Voldemort and now is OMG!Powerful and wise and all-knowing and totally pwns Dumbledore. Um, yeah. So thank you for making him in character (though really I can't expect anything less from you XD)

    Oh yeah, and don't worry about recognising the Pocahontas lyric in the other review. At least you only recognised it - I actually wrote it XD That brings loads more shame on me :C
Title: One More Such Victory 15 Sep 2007 1:50 pm
Reviewer: Chironstar (Signed) [Report This]
    OMG YES! Damn bloody straight it had to be done!!! THIS was the scene I wanted to read after the Battle of Hogwarts! Gah you have no idea how CHEATED and unsatisfied I felt when I read DH, and it skipped STRAIGHT to the epilogue! No funeral, no goodbyes, no acknowledgement, NOTHING! It's been driving me absolute nuts since the day I finished reading it!!!

    THANK YOU SO MUCH for writing this! *GLOMP* You've now managed to return some ounce of sanity to me - THIS is how JK should have ended the whole battle, and it goes without saying that your Snape and Harry interaction is nothing short of perfect - totally believable and totally in character! Well done! And THANK YOU!

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