|
Reviews For One More Such Victory
"Perfect detachment was—not possible." That was just so 'Snape'.
I had a bit of an empty feeling after finishing DH, especially concerning Harry and Snape. If something like this would have been included, it would have made me feel a bit better. I guess that's what fanfic is for, huh? lol. I really loved this line: "I watched you...so closely....for so many years." He gives a little shrug. "Perfect detachment was—not possible." Again, great story! *adds to favorites*
Anyway, I loved it, loved it, loved it. It was so satisfyingly beautiful in so many ways. Thanks...
"Snape's nod is faint, almost imperceptible. "Mostly." SNAPEY - if you weren't dead and like eaten by a big snake then I would totally hug you XD I reckon that this story is soooo plausible, especially after the whole "Look ... at ... me ..." bit at the end when he dies. "Goodbye, then," says Harry. "I hope you...rest peacefully, and all that." HARRY - you are cute. I'm glad he's still awkward and all that (I don't think I spelled awkward wrong but whatever it's midnight and spelling and grammar only work during daylight hours XD) because I've read SOOO many stories where it's all like Mkay Harry defeated Voldemort and now is OMG!Powerful and wise and all-knowing and totally pwns Dumbledore. Um, yeah. So thank you for making him in character (though really I can't expect anything less from you XD) Oh yeah, and don't worry about recognising the Pocahontas lyric in the other review. At least you only recognised it - I actually wrote it XD That brings loads more shame on me :C
THANK YOU SO MUCH for writing this! *GLOMP* You've now managed to return some ounce of sanity to me - THIS is how JK should have ended the whole battle, and it goes without saying that your Snape and Harry interaction is nothing short of perfect - totally believable and totally in character! Well done! And THANK YOU! |
Powered by eFiction 3.5 |