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Title: Chapter 2 - More To Come... 04 May 2008 7:53 am
Reviewer: waterleaves (Signed) [Report This]
    Well done. Interesting premise. Although I'm not sure about the idea that Snape and Harry need to "get together" which you use at the end. Something about the wording just kind of throws it off for me I guess? But good work all around!

    Author's Response: Thank you very much. :). I'm going to get a beta eventually to help me word things right. ;). Glad that you enjoyed it overall. :)
Title: Chapter 2 - More To Come... 14 Apr 2008 1:59 am
Reviewer: rosiegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Very interesting story so far.

    Author's Response: Thank you very much. :)
Title: Chapter 2 - More To Come... 10 Apr 2008 5:07 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    im totally interested, can we see more soon? im really impatient when it comes to fan fiction stories! lol

    Author's Response: I'm glad that you are enjoying it so far. :). As for an update...well, I'm in the middle of a move. I have more written, but I don't know when I'll have time to polish and post. ;). Keep an eye out. I'll get it up there soon.
Title: Chapter 2 - More To Come... 08 Apr 2008 11:02 pm
Reviewer: Escrimer (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wicked story. Me lovey. I hope Harry gets better soon. Voldy did a real number on him. But of course, before he gets better there has to be some angst. What's a story without massive Harry-angst? Keep up the good work.

    Author's Response: Thank you for your review!! I'm glad that you're liking it so far. ;). Yep, angst is a fanfic writer's best friend. lol. Especially where our dear Harry is concerned.
Title: Chapter 2 - More To Come... 08 Apr 2008 9:42 pm
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    You have a great start on an interesting story here. It has familiar elements, but with some true uniquenesses. Snape's attitude is fiercely negative with a slight madness to it also. And I am especially intrigued with Dobby's role in this. Your idea that being freed from one family opens him to all families could have some very interesting repercussions.

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your wonderful review. :D. I'm working really hard on getting more written on this...this is a fic that I'm enjoying tremendously. I'm glad that you have found something in it for you. :D. Keep reading!
Title: Chapter 2 - More To Come... 08 Apr 2008 5:25 pm
Reviewer: Elise_Malfoy (Signed) [Report This]
    WOOHOO! This is so goood!!!!!!!!!!
    I love it, I can't wait for the next chapter. Harry is so.....interesting like this. Kinda cute and adorable too. :) I've been reading his dialogue out-loud in a Lunaish voice. It's really fun. And what is this fire thing he keeps saying? Oh, so many questions! Will Snape take Harry? Can Harry help Snape? Will Snape stop being such a snarky git to the poor boy?
    I can't wait to find out!
    -elise

    Author's Response: lol. Great review. :). All your questions....and more...will be answered. ;). Just keep reading. :).
Title: Chapter 2 - More To Come... 08 Apr 2008 4:10 pm
Reviewer: Nilla (Signed) [Report This]
    I absolutely love this story! It's a very promising beginning and I can't wait for the next chapter! Poor Harry...he reallly has endured a lot of suffering, and Snape too.

    Author's Response: So true. :). *Evil smirk*. I love being able to write about these characters. Thank you very much for your review. More on this story will be updated soon. :)
Title: Chapter 2 - More To Come... 08 Apr 2008 6:15 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    This story sounds really interesting. Poor sweet Harry. I am very curious as to what the meaning of the words Harry is repeating could mean, talk about a mystery. I keep thinking of Fawks, strangly enough, lol. Poor Severus, Dumbledore's words cut him to the core, but the old wizard has a point. I am very curious as to what you have planned for Harry!

    Author's Response: ;). Hang in there, updates are coming. :). Thank you kindly for the review. :D. I'm glad that you're enjoying the story so far. :).
Title: Chapter 2 - More To Come... 08 Apr 2008 5:52 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    When exactly does this story take place? On your summary page, it says pre-GOF but you mentioned Sirius' death at one point in this chapter. Great chapter and I hope you can update again soon!

    Author's Response: Thank you very much! As for the time period...in MY AU "Harry Potter world" Sirius was killed before the GOF year. I'll probably have to explain that at some point....or maybe not. ;). We writers love our mysteries. lol.
Title: Chapter 2 - More To Come... 08 Apr 2008 2:56 am
Reviewer: JolisGSD (Signed) [Report This]
    Very interesting. A novel way to get Severus to mentor Harry.
    Writing is excellent. Please keep updating.

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your kind review. I'm having a hectic year so far, but I have made progress in the next chapters. Updates are steadily being completed and as a result will be posted soon. ;). Thank you for the writing compliment. *Bows*.

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