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Title: Chapter 2 - More To Come... 08 Apr 2008 2:06 am
Reviewer: Potterworm (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Another great chapter; please update again asap.

    Author's Response: Thank you for the review. :). I will be updating soon. :).
Title: Chapter 2 - More To Come... 08 Apr 2008 2:03 am
Reviewer: Chibisnape (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Rocking!!!1 i cannot wait for the next chapter

    Author's Response: Thank you very much! The updates are coming soon. :). Hang in there. ;). I'm glad that you're enjoying the story so far!
Title: Chapter 1 10 Oct 2007 1:14 am
Reviewer: Into The Depths (Signed) [Report This]
    I think that...I want to read more and that I'll be counting the days until you update...and that it as very well written.

    It says self harm in the warning. Is that because of what he did under Imperius or what he will do later (I am not partial to either)?

    Author's Response: Thank you for the review. I have the next two chapters finished, but am having trouble uploading them. They'll be here soon. ;) As for the self-harm...You'll just have to see. ;)
Title: Chapter 1 19 Sep 2007 5:18 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, a very intense beginning! My heart breaks for Harry and the horrible torments he suffered.

    I can't blame him a bit for blocking it out and not wanting to remember.

    Looking forward to more!

    Author's Response: Cool, Thanks! :). More on the way...
Title: Chapter 1 16 Sep 2007 11:14 pm
Reviewer: midnight rain (Anonymous) [Report This]
    awesome story please update soon!!!!!!!

    Author's Response: Thank you. I'll try! :)
Title: Chapter 1 16 Sep 2007 4:51 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow this seems like it will be a very interesting story. I look forward to reading more and I hope you can update again soon!

    Author's Response: Thank you very much. :D. Another chapter is coming. I'm hoping to wrap this up in 3. ;).
Title: Chapter 1 15 Sep 2007 11:26 pm
Reviewer: lotte (Anonymous) [Report This]
    very goods start! i especially like the possibilities for mental anguish in the future - lots of snape/harry luff in the future, i hope! :)
    one qualm: i was confused about the time in which this takes place - the warnings say it's 'preGOF,' which obviously isn't the case. Is it during OoTP, or a 6th year story?

    Keep writing, please! :)

    Author's Response: This story is very A.U. It takes place before GOF...but some of the events during it have already happen.....I hope that made sense. lol. Anyway, it's A.U....to the extreme. ;).
Title: Chapter 1 15 Sep 2007 10:40 pm
Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow...great start to a story that has a lot of potential. I can't wait to see where you take this! You really did a nice job describing the mental anguish of Mint, the house elf. That whole scene with her in the kitchen was my favorite.

    Keep up the awesome writing! I really enjoyed this first chapter :)

    Author's Response: I am so glad that you mentioned Mint. She was the character that started this entire thing! lol. Without her there would be no story. I wrote her character up one day while I was bored and I just LOVED her so much. :D. lol. She sacrificed a lot to save Harry - but I'm trying to figure out a way to bring her back "from the dead" so to speak, because she's just so awesome. Might not happen, but I'll try. Thanks for your review!!
Title: Chapter 1 15 Sep 2007 10:23 pm
Reviewer: AllyKat (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Nice story, can't wait for an update!

    Author's Response:

    AllyKat,

    Thank you for your kind review! More is on the way. :). 

Title: Chapter 1 15 Sep 2007 9:33 pm
Reviewer: strangergirl86 (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh please continue this story. I really enjoyed this. Wonderful idea. Can't wait for more.

    Author's Response: WoW. *blushes*. Thank you for such a stunning review. :). I will do so at the first opportune moment. :). I hope that you enjoy the rest just as well.

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