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Reviews For Emerald Eyes
Title: Chapter 1 17 Feb 2022 11:36 pm
Reviewer: Lilia (Signed) [Report This]
    Great first chapter!
Title: Chapter 1 15 Feb 2012 10:23 pm
Reviewer: Lady Destiny (Signed) [Report This]
    Great start!
Title: Chapter 1 07 Nov 2009 1:54 am
Reviewer: Sara (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Sorry, kinda late here and I'll prob figure this out on my own, but what year is this taking place?

    Author's Response: If you check out the story summary up at the top, it says "Pre-POA" in the "takes place" section, but the incident with the exploding cauldron happened sometime in the fall of second year (Chamber of Secrets). 
Title: Chapter 1 17 Oct 2008 4:09 am
Reviewer: sevsnapelove (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow I didn't know you could write like that! To say the least I am extremely impressed.
Title: Chapter 1 01 Feb 2008 4:34 am
Reviewer: DaughterOfAres (Signed) [Report This]
    *taps foot impatiantly* I hate cliffies.

    Anyway, great chapter as always.

    It seems like you just started this story a week or two ago and allready its five chapters away from ending. Any chance in a sequel?

    Love this story and I'm sure it will make the featured story list. Please update soon.

    Author's Response:

    Ah, there you are.  I got a review notice in my email last night and couldn't find where it was posted. lol.  Chapter 1.  Found it. 

    I'm sorry about the cliffhanger, but you know I'll post a new chapter soon ;)  It DOES feel like I just started this story!  It was way back in September (I think), but still...that kind of scares me to think about how quickly time flies.  As for a sequel, I'm not really sure.  Right now, I don't have an idea for one, and I'm not sure I want to write a fic that just drags and drags,  but who knows...I may get a spark of inspiration :)

    Thanks so much for the review!  Glad you enjoyed this one!

Title: Chapter 1 24 Jan 2008 12:50 am
Reviewer: KatiePonse (Signed) [Report This]
    I just wanted to review the newly revised first chapter to say that it is, as you said, mostly the same with minor edits and all of that, but I also noticed that the writing on a whole is much stronger. Bravo, bravo! This truly is one of the best stories I've seen. :)

    Very enjoyable to read. One of those stories that you can re-read several times without it getting at all stale.

    Author's Response: Thanks, Katie!  I really didn't realize how 'off' this chapter was with the rest of my story until I went back and reread.  It was a bit embarassing, actually. lol.  I'm glad you think this one is better than the last.  I kind of sat there like, uh...no, Harry wouldn't cry during this scene, and Snape would definitely be shocked at himself for his reaction to Harry's cheek.  And I hadn't included that earlier.  *rolls eyes at self*  Anyway, I really appreciate your review of this chapter!  Thank you!
Title: Chapter 1 19 Nov 2007 7:14 pm
Reviewer: lyra (Signed) [Report This]
    What a lovely chapter. You did a good job following up on Harry's breakdown. I'm so glad he told Snape what was going on.

    Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!  Yes, Harry keeping it all inside for a moment longer would have just created unbearable tension...lol.  I couldn't do that the the readers...or myself. 
Title: Chapter 1 02 Oct 2007 4:04 am
Reviewer: Tracy (Signed) [Report This]
    Jade,
    This story was amazing hon! You captured the personality of both Harry and Snape perfectly as well as their mutual antagonism. Harry finds himself in an altogether new situation with Snape being completely justified while Harry is actually well and truly in the wrong. I like how Snape could not maintain his hate and rage after Harry broke down.
    Loved it!
    Tracy
Title: Chapter 1 26 Sep 2007 1:11 am
Reviewer: elocution (Signed) [Report This]
    ha, sorry about the billions of reviews...my computer froze, and evanesco seems to be failing.
Title: Chapter 1 26 Sep 2007 1:05 am
Reviewer: elocution (Signed) [Report This]
    i would -definitely- love a continuation! and you need to post more, young lady. if my computer had been functioning when we were all begging you to post, i would definitely be up in the front of the line hammering at your door. the dursleys make fantastic battering rams, i'll have you know...

    ohhh, and i'm totally in awe of that coincidence with the look at me line. seriously. something about coincidences make me all grinny and philosophically and junk, so yeah...allow me to go off and meditate in some random corner about the meaning of life...

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