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Reviews For Emerald Eyes
Title: Chapter 2 15 Feb 2012 10:23 pm
Reviewer: Lady Destiny (Signed) [Report This]
    I really enjoy the dialogue.
Title: Chapter 2 01 Feb 2008 7:35 pm
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Harry, so confused. He needs a hug! :) Great chapter! I like how you use Snape and Harrys POV.
    Scorpia
Title: Chapter 2 02 Oct 2007 7:13 am
Reviewer: lilseverus (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Awww, a cliffhanger... Engaging story though! can't wait to read more!
Title: Chapter 2 02 Oct 2007 4:05 am
Reviewer: Tracy (Signed) [Report This]
    Jade,
    I had to laugh at Harry's reaction to Hermione. She can be relentless when she wants to know something can't she? LOL! I can well imagine that Harry would dread detention with Snape even under the best of circumstances, feeling confused and ashamed certainly would not constitute the best of circumstances!
    Girl, you are just a wonderful writer!
    Tracy

    Author's Response: Thank you so much!  I'm very flattered by your kind words, considering I'm a huge fan of Ideal Guardian.  Yes, a detention with Snape would be something to dread, especially if the man is disappointed.  The next chapter will address Harry's confusion.  Thanks again for the review (and also for the review for Starting From Scratch).  I appreciate it :)
Title: Chapter 2 01 Oct 2007 11:01 pm
Reviewer: mamaduck (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Lovely. I think you have a good handle on the inner psyche of a 12 year old boy. Many people don't realize that many little boys are just as emotionally sensitive and teary as girls. Girls usually don't have the macho no-tears-allowed attitude though that is so confounding to the young males of our species.

    Poor Harry. He's really confused isn't he? The thought that Snape would feel disappointed with Harry's actions, much less respond to the transgression in the personal manner of a concerned parent, must boggle his little mind. No wonder he's so worried about facing Snape during detention.
    Snape made a comment about if Harry were a Slytherin his smacking would have been much more severe. Will there be follow up to that observation? I always like to think that Snape has more discipline for his students than we are led to believe.

    Please continue soon. Well written and enjoyable.
    Mamaduck

    Author's Response:

    Thank you very much for your thoughtful review!  I always enjoy reading stories/novels/etc. that focus on realistic human emotion.  I love connecting to characters, and Harry is a character I have always been able to relate to.  And honestly, boys are just as emotional as girls.  They just hide it better, I guess. 

    I, also, have always thought that Snape would discipline his students, especially his Slytherins, in a more traditional manner.  I meant for Snape's comment about "not sitting for three days" to be a bit of an exaggeration, mostly for effect, but yes, the punishment would have been a bit more severe.  There will be a follow-up. 

    Thanks again!  I should have the next chapter out very soon :)

Title: Chapter 2 01 Oct 2007 7:45 pm
Reviewer: SnapesYukuai (Anonymous) [Report This]
    PLEASE, continue this story!!! Your would make me very happy. puppy eyes stare at you
    Your Melf

    Author's Response: lol.  I should have the next chapter out in a couple of days.  Thank you for the review!
Title: Chapter 2 01 Oct 2007 6:04 pm
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    this story has great addicting potential! great job keep going with it :)

    Author's Response: Thanks!
Title: Chapter 2 01 Oct 2007 3:06 am
Reviewer: Lily Elizabeth Snape (Signed) [Report This]
    Please continue!

    Author's Response: I will!  Thanks for reading :)
Title: Chapter 2 01 Oct 2007 1:19 am
Reviewer: little stacy (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I like this I hope you keep it going. I'm really curious to see what you have planned.

    Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying this story.  And yes, the wheels are a-turnin'.  lol.  I've got some chapters planned out.  Thanks for the review :)
Title: Chapter 2 01 Oct 2007 12:24 am
Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm glad you're continuing with this. It certainly has promise. I'm anxious for more.

    Author's Response: Thank you!

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