Potions and Snitches
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Reviews For Emerald Eyes
Title: Chapter 3 15 Feb 2012 10:26 pm
Reviewer: Lady Destiny (Signed) [Report This]
    Argh Snape's annoying me!
Title: Chapter 3 01 Feb 2008 7:43 pm
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    I laughed at poor Harry the first time I read this chapter, finding the potion vial's in his pocket is the icing on the cake! Lol, I am SO mean to Harry.
    And the way Harry handled the sitouation was perfect! :)
    Scorpia
Title: Chapter 3 23 Oct 2007 7:44 am
Reviewer: validego (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow! Sorry I haven’t been on to read this lately. Especially since it’s so AWESOME! I felt so tense in this chapter, like I was in a horror movie. I almost looked over my own shoulder I was sympathizing with Harry so much. Great style in this chapter! And I was very proud of him that he returned the vials. Though I’m curious now what he’ll say to Ron and Hermione about that. Spitting image indeed. I wonder what Snape must be thinking now. Well, thanks for the great story. On to the next chapter.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!  And congrats on your featured story :)

    The Ron and Hermione conversation will appear in chapter 7.  I guess I'm trying this approach with Harry where he actually attempts to do the right thing/be accountable.  Of course, he's twelve, so even though he tries...well, what can I say...he's Harry.  lol. 

    Thanks again for the great review!

Title: Chapter 3 12 Oct 2007 6:44 am
Reviewer: amanda (Anonymous) [Report This]
    please update soon

    Author's Response: I'll have the next chapter out by tonight :)
Title: Chapter 3 06 Oct 2007 6:14 pm
Reviewer: blagoo (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I hope you do feel like procrastinating in real life cause this story is great

    Author's Response:

    lol...the prospect of that is very likely.  I'm updating my other story first, but I'll have the next chapter of this one up in the next few days.  Thank you for reading, and thanks for the review :)

Title: Chapter 3 05 Oct 2007 6:07 pm
Reviewer: mamaduck (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I was rereading your third chapter, savouring your delightful prose, when I remembered that I wanted to remark about the "spitting image" comments from Snape: are we to believe that, as usual, Snape is taunting him about his father, when it is actually Harry's mother he is seeing? I am looking forward to the way you plan to reveal these thoughts to Harry (if that is the case). I wonder, if Harry had known earlier, in the books, of Snape's friendship with his mother, would it have had a more positive effect on their relationship?

    Quinn (who is avoiding the laundry to sneak in some computer time..)

    Author's Response:

    Hi again :)

    The next chapter will begin from Snape's perspective and will include a visit to Dumbledore.  It will all come together.  I meant for this chapter to be a bit ambiguous, as that's the kind of writing that I personally enjoy--the kind that keeps you guessing. 

    And yes, the "spitting image" comment referred to James; however, Snape was upset over the stolen items.  Like I said, it will make more sense in the next chapter.

    Thanks for rereading the chapter!  I'm flattered that you think my prose is "delightful" :)

Title: Chapter 3 05 Oct 2007 5:41 pm
Reviewer: Azalea (Signed) [Report This]
    great story! when you made him cry at first chapter about being confused etc. that was so good! This chapter was great! i would of just left with the vials lol!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you!  I'm trying out an "honesty-vibe" with Harry.  Sometimes I just get tired of reading about Harry constantly getting into trouble without giving it a second thought.  He's never accountable for anything, it seems.  But that's because no one ever demands that he accept responsibility for petty acts of defiance.

    I'm glad to hear you're enjoying my story.  I appreciate the review :)

Title: Chapter 3 04 Oct 2007 1:11 am
Reviewer: lilseverus100 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Yay! Another chapter. Poor Harry, with that glass accident, I was happy and suprised that Severus didn't assign even more detentions.

    Author's Response: Yeah, Snape was surprised as well.  lol. But the incident won't go completely unnoticed.  Thanks for the reivew :)
Title: Chapter 3 03 Oct 2007 11:31 pm
Reviewer: Vintage (Signed) [Report This]
    So I'm rereading this chapter in my APUSH class(AP US History) Class. I had read this quickly in the morning before going to school, and I didn't really understand what had happened and why "Severus Snape was also staring intently from the other side [...] on the two gleaming bottles " but i think its because i read it so quickly. I'm right now reading the part when Harry says Snape's a nutter.

    Oh Yes! I finally read it and I got it! When I was skimming it earlier, I missed the part where Harry turns himself in! Good for him!!!! Didn't he have detention tomorrow anyways? Oh please update soon! I'm really learning to love this fic. UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE SOON!
Title: Chapter 3 03 Oct 2007 11:31 pm
Reviewer: Vintage (Signed) [Report This]
    So I'm rereading this chapter in my APUSH class(AP US History) Class. I had read this quickly in the morning before going to school, and I didn't really understand what had happened and why "Severus Snape was also staring intently from the other side [...] on the two gleaming bottles " but i think its because i read it so quickly. I'm right now reading the part when Harry says Snape's a nutter.

    Oh Yes! I finally read it and I got it! When I was skimming it earlier, I missed the part where Harry turns himself in! Good for him!!!! Didn't he have detention tomorrow anyways? Oh please update soon! I'm really learning to love this fic. UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE SOON!

    Author's Response:

    LOL...you're able to read fanfic during class? 

    I'm glad you reread, because this is one of those fics, I suppose, where you have to soak in every detail. 

    Snape's restatement of the next day's detention and the time (7:00 rather than 6:30) was his way of deliberatly failing to scorn Harry for stealing the ingredients.  The fact that he turned them in was enough. 

    Thanks for the review!  And I'll update as soon as I can :)


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