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Reviews For Emerald Eyes
Author's Response: That was my favorite part to write...mainly because that's how I act when I can't sleep on nights when I'm anticipating something. It's funny how we kind of all do the same things. lol. Thanks for reviewing again! By the way, your update just made my day!
Tomorrow I have to go in for a teeny little day surgery and it would be such a treat to check in the evening to see that you had posted.......have I mentioned that your chapters are a highlight in my otherwise pathetic life...just kidding, but really I do hope you have a chance to post soon! Two chapters would be icing on my little cake while I'm recuperating....will you take pity on me? Mamaduck Author's Response: I'll have the next chapter up tomorrow :) Hope your small surgery goes well!
Author's Response: Thanks :) A new chapter will be up in a day or two.
though the plot seems unstable (haha, plotless stories r the best, cuz they can go in any direction...unless that's not what you want) but, yeah, i like it and am so glad you're deciding to keep it going. Author's Response: Thanks for the review! As for the direction of the plot, I'm only on the fourth chapter, and I've got a lot more planned for it. The next couple of chapters should bring everything a bit more together. I happen to be a fan of stories that keep you guessing, so I suppose that is what is coming across in my fic. I'm glad you're enjoying it, though :)
*sighs* since i'm pretty sure i was too lazy to review chapter three, either...snape sure is pretty melodramatic, isn't he? i mean, seriously...door slam, all hail the great snape...lol...very in character though, which makes me happy. that snape is awesome, if only because i have this little running film of his sneering, glaring self... i will keep checking potions and snitches like a maniac in hope of an update! loving the story... Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I'm so glad you caught up. Updates notices, etc. were a little crazy last week. Yeah, Harry's not the smartest, but he has good intentions. I will have a new chapter up this week :)
“Ah, I see…” Dumbledore offered again, mildly. He steepled his fingers in thought and gazed faraway over the tips. “Enlighten me, headmaster, what do you see?” Severus retorted tiredly, without removing the hand from his eyes. Written perfectly! Though yes, McGonogall will be harder to convince! Can't wait for the second detention! Author's Response: Yes, you're right. She will be. lol. Oooh, and I LOVE it when people refer to specific lines they enjoyed. Thanks! I'll have the next chapter out soon! I appreciate the review :)
But to think that he's already found a way to continue his plotting to get into the Slytherin common room. Oh, that should be good. I'm so glad that you will have time to do more writing in the coming week. Your updates are one of the highlights of my week. I hope your muse moves you into high gear with your writing. Excellent job. Mamaduck Author's Response: Thank you so much for your thoughtful review! I appreciate your kind words...I really do. And yes!...I'm so happy that you understand Harry's struggle with conscience. I'll definitely update both of my stories this coming week. Actually, I'll probably get through a couple of chapters. I wish I had consistent free time; I have my first ever parent-teacher conferences on Mon-Wed., and I've decided to write in between appointments. I'm so glad you're enjoying my story. Thanks again!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad to hear you're still reading :) |
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