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Reviews For Emerald Eyes
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! I'm so glad the body language worked out; I tried to make it pretty realistic, and sometimes when I'm writing, I have to demonstrate movements to myself before I type them out (not sure why I'm admitting this...lol) but anyway, I appreciate your kind words :)
Author's Response: Thank you!
Anyway, great chapter and please update again soon. Author's Response: Thank you so much! I really appreciate all of your kind reviews. I think I've said it before, but I really have always felt connected with Harry. And I'm so flattered that you think that I write him well. I will have a new chapter out as soon as I can. Maybe I'll work on this story first. I didn't realize I left it at a bit of a cliffie state...lol. Thanks again!
Author's Response: Hey again :) Thanks so much for your review! Yes, Harry will eventually find out. I know it seems a bit vague right now, but obviously, Severus doesn't want to admit the real reason for taking Harry in hand. And like I told someone else, when I reread through this chapter, Severus was very intimidating to me as a reader...lol. I scare myself sometimes. Thanks again for your continued support of my writing. I really appreciate it!
Author's Response: Thanks! And I will update soon :)
Author's Response: lol! I promise I'll work on the next chapter this weekend. I've had it planned out for quite some time. Thanks for the review!
Some of my favourite lines: "Potter....the medium of most-if not all -congregational concerns of the wizarding world.." and when Snape feels McGonagall's letter is "melodramatic". I guess it takes one to know one! and last, after Snape has delivered his lecture on consequences and actually mentions the "s" word, Harry's very appropriate 12 year old response, albeit to himself,"No effing way". I wonder how long it will take for Harry to forget or disregard this warning. Given his natural propensity for trouble, am I correct to expect less than a week!? Hopefully you can post more right away. Your chapters are like chocolate, the more I get, the more I want! Write on, Mamaduck Author's Response: Thank you for your wonderful, kind review! I'm glad your surgery went well and you were able to read my update :) See, I told you I'd do it...lol. I read over this chapter before I posted it this afternoon and actually felt Harry's embarassment after the lecture. I suppose I go into another mind set when I write and am not really able to get the whole "scope" of it until I switch into "reader" mode. lol...Weird, I know. And yes, you're correct to expect less than a week :) I'll write more this weekend. Thanks again! I have to say reading reviews is definitely MY chocolate.
Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I've had this little plot developing in my head for quite a while, and sometimes I have to force myself to have patience when writing to make sure I don't skip over anything. lol. I'll update as soon as I can! I plan to write more this weekend. |
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