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Title: Chapter 5 20 Oct 2007 4:07 am
Reviewer: wynnleaf (Signed) [Report This]
    Excellent interaction between Snape and Harry. Their body language worked perfectly with the descriptions of voice and thoughts.

    Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review!  I'm so glad the body language worked out; I tried to make it pretty realistic, and sometimes when I'm writing, I have to demonstrate movements to myself before I type them out (not sure why I'm admitting this...lol) but anyway, I appreciate your kind words :)
Title: Chapter 5 20 Oct 2007 1:53 am
Reviewer: ayana (Anonymous) [Report This]
    lovely chapter! can't wait to read more!

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Chapter 5 20 Oct 2007 1:50 am
Reviewer: DaughterOfAres (Signed) [Report This]
    Love it. Absolutly, postively, love it. I can't wait for the next chapter. I'm always amazed, every time I read your story, how well you write Harry. You seem to get into his head amazingly well. Its wonderful. I love it. I think I mentioned that already though.

    Anyway, great chapter and please update again soon.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you so much!  I really appreciate all of your kind reviews.  I think I've said it before, but I really have always felt connected with Harry.  And I'm so flattered that you think that I write him well. 

    I will have a new chapter out as soon as I can.  Maybe I'll work on this story first.  I didn't realize I left it at a bit of a cliffie state...lol. 

    Thanks again!

Title: Chapter 5 20 Oct 2007 1:50 am
Reviewer: LindseySnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow I love Severus' body language in this chapter, I can really picture him sitting next to and really torturing Harry. I can't wait to see Harry's reaction when he finds out the reason that Severus is taking such a personal responsibility to his behavior is because he cares about his safety and well being. Totally looking forward to more keep up the great work, and please update again soon. LES

    Author's Response:

    Hey again :)

    Thanks so much for your review!  Yes, Harry will eventually find out.  I know it seems a bit vague right now, but obviously, Severus doesn't want to admit the real reason for taking Harry in hand. 

    And like I told someone else, when I reread through this chapter, Severus was very intimidating to me as a reader...lol.  I scare myself sometimes. 

    Thanks again for your continued support of my writing.  I really appreciate it!

Title: Chapter 5 20 Oct 2007 1:39 am
Reviewer: bookworm3213 (Signed) [Report This]
    whee! awesome chapter! update soon please

    Author's Response: Thanks!  And I will update soon :)
Title: Chapter 5 20 Oct 2007 1:16 am
Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) [Report This]
    Aarrgh! I can't believe you ended it here! I want to know what sort of control he's gained over Harry and I want him to tell Harry and I want... I want... the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!

    Author's Response: lol!  I promise I'll work on the next chapter this weekend.  I've had it planned out for quite some time.  Thanks for the review!
Title: Chapter 5 20 Oct 2007 1:12 am
Reviewer: mamaduck (Anonymous) [Report This]
    O thank you, thank you! It was every bit as good as I had hoped and a wonderful ending to my day: the teeny surgery ended up being a little bigger than expected and I had to stay a little longer due to some minor complications.

    Some of my favourite lines:
    "Potter....the medium of most-if not all -congregational concerns of the wizarding world.."
    and when Snape feels McGonagall's letter is "melodramatic". I guess it takes one to know one!
    and last, after Snape has delivered his lecture on consequences and actually mentions the "s" word, Harry's very appropriate 12 year old response, albeit to himself,"No effing way".

    I wonder how long it will take for Harry to forget or disregard this warning. Given his natural propensity for trouble, am I correct to expect less than a week!?

    Hopefully you can post more right away. Your chapters are like chocolate, the more I get, the more I want!
    Write on,
    Mamaduck

    Author's Response:

    Thank you for your wonderful, kind review!  I'm glad your surgery went well and you were able to read my update :)  See, I told you I'd do it...lol. 

    I read over this chapter before I posted it this afternoon and actually felt Harry's embarassment after the lecture.  I suppose I go into another mind set when I write and am not really able to get the whole "scope" of it until I switch into "reader" mode.  lol...Weird, I know. 

    And yes, you're correct to expect less than a week :)  I'll write more this weekend.

    Thanks again!  I have to say reading reviews is definitely MY chocolate.

Title: Chapter 5 20 Oct 2007 1:12 am
Reviewer: Heather (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wonderful! Keep it up, I'm loving it so far. It so very well written and I'm interested to see where you'll go with this. And of course I can't wait for the first spanking! =) Please write fast!

    Author's Response: Thank you for the review!  I've had this little plot developing in my head for quite a while, and sometimes I have to force myself to have patience when writing to make sure I don't skip over anything.  lol.  I'll update as soon as I can!  I plan to write more this weekend.

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