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Reviews For Emerald Eyes
By the way, I'm a bookseller for Barnes and Noble and a writer in my spare time. If you want check out some of my fics posted on www.harrypotterfanfiction.com. One is a novel about Severus and what might have been if certain things had happened to him before he became a professor and the other is a short story. My penname is Snapegirl. Reviews are always welcome, keep up the wonderful work! Author's Response: Thanks for such a great review! I'll definitely check out your writing.
Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it! Writing Harry's thoughts is my favorite. It's quite fun. lol. This chapter was one where I kind of sat back and thought..."hmmm...is it too soon to make Snape seem a bit caring?"...and then I thought.."Well, yeah...better make the must as Snape-like as possible." So hopefully I accomplished that. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! P.S. Go write a new chapter! I love your story! lol.
I think I sympathise with Harry`s state; he was tired and ill; and Snape start his speech of consequences and so on; in is place I`d be like come on shut up and let me be I don`t want to hear you right now!, but of course that wouldn`t be wise at all ;) Well I´m look` forward to next chap. I want to know if Harry will talk with Dumbledore...and if he`d make his way into Slytherin`s common room... It`s a good beggining. I`m glad that you plan to continue. Keep writing. Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! Yeah, I don't think Snape ever explains himself, even in canon. Of course, that's not going to fly with Harry as Snape will soon find out. Dumbledore will make an appearance in the next chapter, and as for the Slytherin common room...well, we'll see ;) I'm glad you're enjoying the story! I should have a new chapter out by Saturday.
Poor Snape probably tired of grading all those papers and coming in to see Harry sleeping instead of writing... Though he is to strict with all those detentions! Author's Response: Yeah, he is strict, but at least he didn't have Harry expelled for what he did. Thanks for the review!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Yes, poor Harry, indeed...he's not used to having anyone care about him when he's sick. So glad you're enjoying the story :)
I love the way you write Harry's thoughts- I can only imagine the fall out if Harry *were* to give Snape the finger! This detention will have given Harry much more to think about, especially now that he has actually experienced some kindness from Snape. Poor wee thing, will he be able to associate this kindness with the type of care most children would unconsciously expect from an adult? Wrote more, soon! Love it! Mamaduck Author's Response: Hi! Thanks for reading and reviewing again :) I'm so glad you're enjoying the story. Yeah, if Harry actually said what he thought, he'd learn pretty quickly about Snape's intolerance...lol. I believe he's smart enough to bite his tongue, though, at least for now... However, it's really fun writing Harry's thoughts. Harry will eventually see the light about Snape, but like any twelve year old who is suddenly told what to do, of course Harry wouldn't see Snape's kindness as anything other than annoying. Kids don't always appreciate the little things, but Harry will realize eventually. Thanks again for your continued support! Your reviews are great :)
Will Harry be better by tomorrow's detention or will he be to sick to move when he wakes up in the morning? I can see Snape being concerned/annoyed when he doesn't see him the whole day then finding out he's in the Hospital Wing. Good chapter, as always, and please update again soon. Author's Response: Yes, you truly did; however, I had started the chapter on Saturday night and just decided to go ahead and finish it last night and post it :) A lot of Harry's "under the weather" status was due to his lack of sleep. It kind of triggered it. I think Harry's smart enough to do what he's told and go to bed ;) Thanks for the review!
I can't wait for Harry's confrontation with Albus! Dumbledore seems to understand Snape's motives are based on concern for Harry's well-being. . .but I doubt he'll be able to convince Harry of this. Can't wait to see how ALbus handles this! Looking forward to more!!! Author's Response: I love it when people understand exactly what I try to get across in my writing. Thanks so much for being awesome and doing just that :) You're right: no one has ever cared if Harry was sick or not, and that is why he really didn't know how to react. He's already feeling a bit smothered, so he does what he always does and plans to run to Dumbledore. And of course, Snape uses the "no sleeping in detention" thing to stray from the fact that Harry just needs to get to bed on time because, well, he's twelve. Thanks so much for your great review! I love reading what you have to say. I'll have a new chapter out as soon as I can!
Author's Response: Well...several things...as much truth as he can without spilling it all :) |
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