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Title: Chapter 6 22 Oct 2007 8:53 am
Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) [Report This]
    What a sweet chapter. Snape has a heart afterall. Who'd have guessed? Um, you still haven't told us something, something very important. I think maybe you should get your quill back out, pull out some more parchment, and get to it. We're waiting... um... patiently. Not that we don't appreciate such a sweet chapter but honestly, how long are you going to keep us waiting? I could go grey waiting! Wait, I am grey, scratch that. I'll just go to bed now.

    Author's Response:

    Have I really forgotten something?

    And yes, Snape's concern was subtle.  Hopefully it doesn't overshadow the man's Snapeness.  We wouldn't want that.

    Thanks for reviewing!  I'll write more soon :)

Title: Chapter 6 22 Oct 2007 8:31 am
Reviewer: curlybean (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh happy day! Another chapter already? And all it took was some reviews from your faithful readers? If that's the case I'll campaign to have every single reader review for you. You deserve it anyway (smile).

    Again, I loved the chapter. You have such a way of describing the scenery and the actions/body language of the characters that it truly is like watching a movie. And Harry's internal monologue is so perfect. Good thing he's learned to keep his comments to himself. I have to admit that the picture I had in my mind of Harry sleeping with his head down on the desk was adorable. Definitely filled the awww! quotient for the chapter.

    Can't wait to see what Harry has to say to Dumbledore. I hope this review encourages you to update soon, but I'll take the next chapter whenever I can get it. Thanks.....

    Author's Response:

    Wow, thanks for the great review!  Well, see, I began typing last night and kind of got on a role.  lol.  I'm really glad you enjoyed this chapter.  Harry's thoughts are fun to write.  I try not to mess around in Snape's head too much...it frightens me a bit (ha!). 

    I also figure that the threat of punishment is enough to keep Harry in line, at least for few days anyway.  I don't think that he deliberatly gets himself into trouble...it's just that he doesn't think before he does things, and that's what will be addressed mostly in the next several chapters.  And as for the "cuteness" factor, I really tried not to make anyone sick up during that scene, but come on, he's only twelve.

    Thanks again for reading!  I'll try to have a new chapter up as soon as I can, which more than likely will be by the end of the week :)


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