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Title: Chapter 9 12 Nov 2007 6:32 am
Reviewer: mamaduck (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Thank you Jade, for another lovely chapter! I don't really have anything to add that wasn't already covered in someone else's review. I liked the whole chapter, from beginning to end. Poor Harry. He really needed the impetus to propel him into losing his composure and finding an emotional release. And poor Snape; clearly out of his element with whatever is bothering this boy. The little insight into Snape's private life was excellent as well. I am so looking forward to your next chapter. I hope real life doesn't get in your way too much this week. Mamaduck

    Author's Response:

    Hi!  Thanks for reading and reviewing :)  I almost didn't add the small Snape-perspective section, but now I'm glad I kept it.  I tried to convey Snape's confusion and slight awkwardness during the very last scene. 

    And yes, to put it plainly, real life sucks.  lol.  I would much rather write than anything.  *sigh* Oh, well...

    Thanks again for the encouragement!

Title: Chapter 9 12 Nov 2007 3:07 am
Reviewer: Ayana (Anonymous) [Report This]
    wow! I love this chapter I re-read like 5 times! your character's fit so perfectly, this is honestly one of the best fics I've read. I could feel my heart hammering when harrys cloak got caught xD and when harry had a "breakdown" during his punishment was definatley one of teh bets moments in this chap. I love your work it's so well written!

    Author's Response: Thanks for the awesome review!  I'm glad you enjoyed it enough to read it five times over ;)
Title: Chapter 9 12 Nov 2007 1:52 am
Reviewer: midnight rain (Anonymous) [Report This]
    awesome chap. please update soon!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'll update as soon as I can :)
Title: Chapter 9 12 Nov 2007 1:09 am
Reviewer: DaughterOfAres (Signed) [Report This]
    Excellent chapter. Absolutly, loved the ending. I hope he tells Snape whats up in the next chapter, but I have feeling he won't (at least not everything). *sigh* Anyway, excellent chapter and I can't wait for an update.

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review!  I suppose it depends how you would define "everything" but I think you'll be satisfied with what goes down in Chapter...10...gosh, am I that far already?  lol. 
Title: Chapter 9 12 Nov 2007 12:54 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    Sorry it took so long for me to reveiw. I had some work to do, but now I could just kick back and relax and enjoy reading you're update. And I did enjoy it, just as good as alway! I can't wait for the next chapter, this story is just really entertaining.

    Author's Response: Hi!  And thanks very much for reading and reviewing :)  I'm glad you find the story entertaining!  Good luck with all of your work ;)
Title: Chapter 9 11 Nov 2007 11:19 pm
Reviewer: pdantzler (Signed) [Report This]
    How excited was I to see that you had updated. I read this chapter several times, and I've got to say it gets better with every read. I liked it so much. From the beginning with Harry still laying on the table to the heartwarming ending, I loved it!

    Let's see if I can pick out my favorite parts. Snape telling Harry that he knew he was up to something, and then Snape's proclamation of "I knew it!" when he finally caught Harry. That moment was great, and I could see the pleasure on Snape's face at the satisfaction of being right. Nothing is greater for an adult than being right, and I think Snape was glad that he had not been mistaken the whole time and that his "rightness" was not in danger.

    Ron and Hermione were cute as well. The part where Harry's Cloak got caught in the door was very scary, and I kept thinking "run, run, you silly boy!" I liked that Ron knocked over the armor, and I could picture Hermione's face when she heard it.

    Snape's reaction fit wonderfully. I was so glad he didn't yell, didn't waste time lecturing, just marched Harry down to his office and prepared to punish him. Making Harry bend over his lap was a great touch as it showed Snape wanting Harry to understand that he had got himself in trouble and he was responsible for his own actions.

    After reading this chapter, I began to shake my head over ATAPTG. I finished it a while ago, but after your story, I wish I could go back and make my Snape less talkative and more a silent authoritive figure like yours.

    And the ending seemed so realistic with Harry crying way too hard, and Snape knowing something was amiss. Please hurry and write the next chapter so I can see how Snape reacts. I really don't to write more until I see more from you.

    Well Done

    Author's Response:

    Wow...this review is awesome in all kinds of ways.  Thanks very much for it!  I tried to write the punishment scene as realistically as possible.  And don't you shake your head at Time and Place!  lol...Your story inspired me!  But I'm incredibly flattered that you find my Snape believable. 

    And okay...let's just type our chapters at the same time and post at the end of the week.  That would be quite lovely. 

    Thanks again for reading and reviewing!

Title: Chapter 9 11 Nov 2007 10:39 pm
Reviewer: End Transmission (Signed) [Report This]
    Long chapters are definetly better. : ) I love the story so far, and I'm looking forward to more.

    Author's Response: Yes, long chapters are better, aren't they?  :)  Thanks for reading and reviewing!  Glad to see you're enjoying the story.
Title: Chapter 9 11 Nov 2007 8:55 pm
Reviewer: Twinheart (Signed) [Report This]
    I just love this story! Your characters are so believeable and have so much depth. Despite Snape's crusty manner, it's clear he understands that Harry is stressed out. I hope Harry confides in him. His breakdown was so heartbreaking and sadly sweet.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks so much for the great review!  I've had this chapter planned out, at least the very end of it, for a long time.  I tried not to overdose on the fluff factor of this chapter, but I'm glad it worked for you!  Thanks again ;)

Title: Chapter 9 11 Nov 2007 7:39 pm
Reviewer: Azalea (Signed) [Report This]
    BAH! You better hurry and write the next chapter! lol

    Author's Response:

    I will!  I got your story, and it's great! 

    Thanks for reading and reviewing!!

Title: Chapter 9 11 Nov 2007 7:21 pm
Reviewer: Eniledam (Signed) [Report This]
    Brilliant work! I love your characterizations and your Snape and Harry just seem so real! The way you made Harry slowly break down throughout the chapter was amazing and I think that the way he finally broke during the punishment was great. I think that Harry needs a good hug and to tell Snape about the voices :) Snape also seems just perfect harsh and yet a teacher at the same time. Love it!

    WONDERFUL WORK! Please update soon... I can hardly wait!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for the awesome review!  I really go for the realism thing, so I'm glad you're getting that vibe as you read my story.  I'll update as soon as I can.  Curse real life...lol. 


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