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Reviews For Emerald Eyes
Author's Response: Hi! Thanks for reading and reviewing :) I almost didn't add the small Snape-perspective section, but now I'm glad I kept it. I tried to convey Snape's confusion and slight awkwardness during the very last scene. And yes, to put it plainly, real life sucks. lol. I would much rather write than anything. *sigh* Oh, well... Thanks again for the encouragement!
Author's Response: Thanks for the awesome review! I'm glad you enjoyed it enough to read it five times over ;)
Author's Response: Thank you! I'll update as soon as I can :)
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I suppose it depends how you would define "everything" but I think you'll be satisfied with what goes down in Chapter...10...gosh, am I that far already? lol.
Author's Response: Hi! And thanks very much for reading and reviewing :) I'm glad you find the story entertaining! Good luck with all of your work ;)
Let's see if I can pick out my favorite parts. Snape telling Harry that he knew he was up to something, and then Snape's proclamation of "I knew it!" when he finally caught Harry. That moment was great, and I could see the pleasure on Snape's face at the satisfaction of being right. Nothing is greater for an adult than being right, and I think Snape was glad that he had not been mistaken the whole time and that his "rightness" was not in danger. Ron and Hermione were cute as well. The part where Harry's Cloak got caught in the door was very scary, and I kept thinking "run, run, you silly boy!" I liked that Ron knocked over the armor, and I could picture Hermione's face when she heard it. Snape's reaction fit wonderfully. I was so glad he didn't yell, didn't waste time lecturing, just marched Harry down to his office and prepared to punish him. Making Harry bend over his lap was a great touch as it showed Snape wanting Harry to understand that he had got himself in trouble and he was responsible for his own actions. After reading this chapter, I began to shake my head over ATAPTG. I finished it a while ago, but after your story, I wish I could go back and make my Snape less talkative and more a silent authoritive figure like yours. And the ending seemed so realistic with Harry crying way too hard, and Snape knowing something was amiss. Please hurry and write the next chapter so I can see how Snape reacts. I really don't to write more until I see more from you. Well Done Author's Response: Wow...this review is awesome in all kinds of ways. Thanks very much for it! I tried to write the punishment scene as realistically as possible. And don't you shake your head at Time and Place! lol...Your story inspired me! But I'm incredibly flattered that you find my Snape believable. And okay...let's just type our chapters at the same time and post at the end of the week. That would be quite lovely. Thanks again for reading and reviewing!
Author's Response: Yes, long chapters are better, aren't they? :) Thanks for reading and reviewing! Glad to see you're enjoying the story.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the great review! I've had this chapter planned out, at least the very end of it, for a long time. I tried not to overdose on the fluff factor of this chapter, but I'm glad it worked for you! Thanks again ;)
Author's Response: I will! I got your story, and it's great! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!
WONDERFUL WORK! Please update soon... I can hardly wait! Author's Response: Thanks for the awesome review! I really go for the realism thing, so I'm glad you're getting that vibe as you read my story. I'll update as soon as I can. Curse real life...lol. |
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