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Title: Chapter 11 26 Nov 2007 5:36 am
Reviewer: pkrosche (Signed) [Report This]
    Great update as always! I really enjoyed the argument between Harry and Ron, it was so realistic, if that dosen't sound stupid. I also realized that Harry would think to wear his Dursley clothes to detention...but was plesently surprised to read what happened there. I forget how much Snape knows of Harry's home life, but was expecting more questions about the Dursleys here. Maybe next chapter especially since Snape is staying with Harry in the storage room. Hmmm...I really can't think of anything else but really good chapter! (I like it when they're long!) I can't wait for the next installment! Good luck writing and happy week to you too!

    Author's Response:

    I'm so glad you thought the argument was realistic, and no, of course it doesn't sound stupid!  Realism is what I'm always going for in this story :) 

    The lack of questions from Snape was intentional.  I suppose I've created a quiet, yet observant Snape.  The questions will fly soon, however. 

    Thank you so much for the great review and kind words of encouragement!

Title: Chapter 11 26 Nov 2007 5:04 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    As always, just as amusing and interesting as them all. And, if you post again soon, I'm sure I could find it in my heart to forgive you for the cliff-hanger ;)

    Keep up the great work!

    Beth

    Author's Response:

    Thank you!  I'll have a new chapter up by the weekend.  I'm glad you find my story amusing, as it is quite emotionally exhausting at times--to write, at least :)

Title: Chapter 11 26 Nov 2007 3:52 am
Reviewer: Myrrdin (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This chapter certainly...damn. Well, I can't leave a very good review right now due to a splitting headache, but I'll write a better one later telling you how much I love your story. Promise!

    Author's Response: Sorry about your headache!  But I do appreciate you taking the time to read and review my story :)  Thank you!
Title: Chapter 11 26 Nov 2007 3:18 am
Reviewer: SiriuslyMental (Signed) [Report This]
    Brilliant, as usual. I love the fight between Harry and Ron - so realistically little boyish - and the predicament with Harry the Trouserless, Snape, and a jump saftey-pin. It was a wonderful chapter, and I'm already looking forwards to another update! You really capture the characters as they are in the books, without having to resort to fanon to make them suit your plot, which is wonderfully refreshing.

    Author's Response: I'm glad you thought the fight was realistic...Ron was beginning to drive me nuts, so I had to do something...lol.  (Funny how I characterize these kids and then shake my head at them...)  Thank you very much for such a wonderful review.  I definitely laughed outloud at "Harry the Trouserless"  :)
Title: Chapter 11 26 Nov 2007 3:11 am
Reviewer: DaughterOfAres (Signed) [Report This]
    Love the chapter as always. I laughed at the scene when Snape tried to fix Harry's clothes. Great chapter as always and please update soon.

    Author's Response:

    I really try to add humor to this story, as it's quite angsty.  The part with Snape shrinking Harry's clothes was meant to be sort of awkwardly funny--one of those moments where you're not sure whether to laugh or feel sympathy for whoever is suffering... lol. 

    Thank you so much for the review!

    P.S. I can't wait to read your Christmas story :)

Title: Chapter 11 26 Nov 2007 3:10 am
Reviewer: bellatrix (Signed) [Report This]
    I don't know if I should feel sorrier for Snape or Harry LOL. Poor Harry having such an awkward moment, and poor Snape for having his patience so tested!
    As always this chapter was wonderful - and leaves me on tenterhooks for the next installment! :-)

    Author's Response: Yes, it was quite awkward, wasn't it?  lol.  Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!  I'm glad you're enjoying my story :)

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