Potions and Snitches
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Title: Chapter 12 08 Dec 2007 7:16 am
Reviewer: sweetness_14 (Signed) [Report This]
    mmmm loved it! i really like the relationship snape and harry have

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm glad you're enjoying the story.  The Snape/Harry interaction is fun to write ;)
Title: Chapter 12 08 Dec 2007 6:32 am
Reviewer: Elise_Malfoy (Signed) [Report This]
    Snape was lovely in this chapter, seriously, I love your Snape.
    This was my favorite part:

    “Do not disappoint me, Potter.”

    Harry could only stare. No one had ever said anything like that to him in his entire life. The boy shook his head, “No, I won’t.” And somehow, Harry knew he meant it.

    Love it! So sweet!

    I'll be looking for the next chapter, I was so happy when I saw you had updated.
    Can't wait!
    -Elise

    Author's Response: Oh, I'm so glad you liked that line!  I meant for it to carry a lot of weight, and it seems like for you, it did.  So that's awesome :)  Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. 
Title: Chapter 12 08 Dec 2007 2:21 am
Reviewer: Judgment99 (Signed) [Report This]
    I really like this story. Its a little hard to make Snape seem like himself and somewhat teacher-like all at once. But you portray him very well. He seems very Snape-like, and Harry seems incharacter too. Good job!

    Author's Response: Thanks!  When I reread a new chapter, I always have to pay attention to Snape's snarkiness and make sure that he's in character.  So I tweak a little here and there.  And so far it seems to be working all right.  I really appreciate your feedback in regard to Snape and Harry :)
Title: Chapter 12 08 Dec 2007 1:23 am
Reviewer: T Stevenson (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I love your Snape, he is stern and strict and yet he seems to being seeing Harry for Harry rather than his dad. I also like how he is perceptive in regards to Harry's "play clothes". Of course my hope is that the two of them begin to care for one another despite themselves. I'm always excited when you have a new chapter. I'm looking forward to a growing relationship between the two of them.

    Author's Response:

    I think that Severus could have seen Lily in Harry rather than James--he just never wanted to see it that way in the series, unfortunately.  *sigh*

    I realized that Harry couldn't get away so easily without an interrogation, but I wanted to make it very subtle.  Of course, Harry wouldn't really understand the odd questions, but we know that Snape is far from done with the situation ;)

    Thank you very much for the kind review.  I should have a new chapter up soon!

Title: Chapter 12 07 Dec 2007 11:43 pm
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    Ah, another great chapter. I don't THINK you're forgetting anything Jade, possibly some minor scenes in the Book/Movie, but nothing off the top of my mind screams at me at the moment. As for Snape in this chapter, he's fine, in both contexts of the word ;) You did his charactre justice, nothing seems off with him. I'm glad you enjoy our reviews, I do enjoy giving them when I enjoy a story, which I most definatly am. Don't worry, I'll never abandon this story, so you better not either *glares warningly* I'm glad to hear there will be another update sommetime this month, it's a comfort. New chapters do make a grand Holiday gift after all.

    keep up the great work!

    sincerly,
    Beth

    Author's Response:

    Dear, dear Beth...I would NEVER abandon this story.  It killed me to wait longer than usual to post...(My sisters get mad at me when I shut myself up in my room and write...lol...but oh, well).  Also, our internet has to be reconnected since we just moved, and I couldn't stand not replying to reviews, so here I sit at Starbucks on a Sunday morning :) 

    Not all of the scenes from the book will be in my story.  We're dealing with the same situation but in a different way. 

    Thank you so much for reading and reviwing!  I really appreciate it.

Title: Chapter 12 07 Dec 2007 11:28 pm
Reviewer: Into The Depths (Signed) [Report This]
    Awesome chapter! I loved how you made Snape in character even though he suspected neglect and/or abuse!
    Now, he checked Harry's wrist. Was that for cutting or just bruises?

    Author's Response:

    Thank you! 

    And actually, he was checking Harry's hands for potion damage since Harry had been working with so many expired onces.  I believe the line in the chapter was "checked for potion-irritation".  I often miss things in stories as well and things tend to make more sense after a second read-through...so I understand ;) 

    And just so you know, there will not be any selfharm!Harry in this story. 

    Thanks again for reading and reviewing :)

Title: Chapter 12 07 Dec 2007 10:16 pm
Reviewer: bellatrix (Signed) [Report This]
    Snape is just Snapetastic. In my humble opinion. As usual I loved this! Thanks for sharing :-)

    Author's Response:

    lol...Snapetastic...  I love it. 

    Thanks for reading and reviewing!  I'm so glad you're still enjoying the story.  So....Gambler's Son...updating anytime soon?...*nudges you*

     

Title: Chapter 12 07 Dec 2007 9:33 pm
Reviewer: cathyrf (Signed) [Report This]
    I thought Snape was perfectly "Snapey." Making him that intense just keeps him right in character for me.

    The dialog between he and Harry was very well done and great fun to read. And he gave Harry a present! Awwww!

    Can't wait to see where the story goes from here.

    Author's Response:

    Well, good, I was hoping he was in character in this chapter ;)  Each time I write a new chapter, I have to go back and read the previous one to make sure that I am sustaining the tone from chapter to chapter.  I seem to tweak a lot as I write, as well as after I'm finished, but I suppose that's a good thing. 

    I'm glad you enjoyed the dialogue.  I love writing it. 

    Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Title: Chapter 12 07 Dec 2007 9:18 pm
Reviewer: wynnleaf (Signed) [Report This]
    Great interaction between Snape and Harry!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I quite enjoy writing it :)  Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Title: Chapter 12 07 Dec 2007 7:21 pm
Reviewer: pkrosche (Signed) [Report This]
    Woot! Great chapter! Can't wait to see what you've got waiting for us in the next one.

    I liked how everything played out here. I guess it was just a little too intense for Snape to be so sudden with seriousness at Harry's exclimation of "it's got pictures!" But, that also could be explained by his demeanor, Snape is just cautious...being a double-agent and all kinda does that to you. So, maybe I was just as freaked as Harry, which is good!

    I do love how Snape is able to interrigate Harry without making it excruciatingly painfull for either of them. It always seems right for Harry to open up to Snape and when he does he feels better about it, knowing that someone knows. At least he's now got Severus looking out for him.

    Hmmm...really interested in that book, though. I wonder if it's going to show up again somewhere...

    Well, I'm certainly looking forward to Ron's disgusted (and hilarious at that) exclimations about his detention. And wonder how Harry's going to take the barage of questions that are sure to come. OOh! And CHESS!! YAY!

    Happy Weekend!

    Author's Response:

    First of all, thank you for leaving me such a wonderful review!  I really enjoyed reading it. :)  I meant for the Snape-freaks-out moment to be a bit of a shocker.  So that is a good thing that you felt tha that way!  lol. 

    There will be some more trio-interaction, as well as questions--well at least from Hermione. 

    Thanks again; I hope you had a good weekend!


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