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Reviews For Emerald Eyes
Hopefully. More please. Author's Response: Thank you for letting me know that you're reading and enjoying my story! It's always wonderful to hear from new reviewers. And I appreciate you taking the time out to leave me a few words of encouragement :) I'm finishing up the new chapter tonight if it kills me... lol.
Lemon drop for Snape for keeping his cool and listening to Harry's explanation. He is getting really good at this. I reread the section where he gave Harry the portkey at least five times. That was a perfect aww moment. He may not know it but I love how much Snape is growing to care for and dare I say love Harry. Author's Response: Yay! I've thrown readers for a loop twice now! lol. Another reviewer mentioned something about being surprised over the whole hospital scene, so that made me feel good, considering I'm pretty hard on myself over coming up with the creative and unexpected ;) I'm so, so glad that you enjoyed the portkey scene! I mentioned it to someone else, but I was very nervous how that would work out. Or if it would make sense. But everyone seems to have picked up on its importance! Hmmm...Snape loving Harry in a mentor-ish father/son way. Doesn't that just give you the warm fuzzies? As for me...Guilty. I must say, thank you very much for the lovely review! I always appreciate your feedback :)
Author's Response: Thanks! I appreciate you giving my story a chance AND letting me know what you think about it so far :) I know that Harry is supposed to be brave and mature and defiant (which I guess he still possesses quite a bit of the latter) but he is only twelve...and after hanging around my cousin who will be thirteen in about six months, it reminded me of how young twelve year olds ACTUALLY are! In my opinion, I don't think that Harry would be any different ;) I still try to keep my version of Harry as we expect him to be. But I do also throw some realism in this story, which hopefully readers are able to relate to. Wow, sorry to ramble...lol. But thanks again for the review!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for letting me know! I'm a big fan of your story 'Brothers by Blood', so hearing that you're enjoying my story is quite the compliment :)
Author's Response: Thank you!
I loved it when he realized just where he was and who it was that was coming down that hall! Talk about your "oops!" moments. LOL! So Snape has given the portkey to Harry and cannot find the other one. He does not seem like a man who misplaces things, so, did somebody take it then? Hmmm, the plot thickens! And he is going to allow Harry to help. I wonder if Harry will be able to follow Snape's instructions when push comes to shove, even knowing the consequences to disobedience could be most uncomfortable. I know you said that this story is getting to be more challenging to write, but it flows beautifully! Tracy Author's Response: I know I already replied to this, but I just wanted to let you know how much I appreciate the time you take to review each one of my chapters during your busy life :) Thanks, Tracy! Oh, and about the whole 'portkey' question...I daresay you might be right. *Holds breath* Oh, and another thing...I like how you said 'when push comes to shove' because with Harry, even though he really tries his hardest, he's...still Harry. And he loses his temper. And he's twelve. So of course, they're going to still have issues. But what sort of adult and adolescent DOESN'T have tiffs every once in a while? Yes, Snape is starting to wise up in the way he deals with Harry, but that doesn't mean he isn't any less strict when it comes to his discipline. Anyway, thanks again Tracy! Glad you got the chance to catch up :)
Author's Response: Thank you! Well, I still have about 3-5 chapters left...(approximately) so this story won't end too soon. I AM very flattered that you are enjoying my story enough to savor it :) Thanks for the lovely compliment!
This was great, although it is rather worrisome that one of the portkeys is missing. Severus does not appear to me to be someone who would misplace something. Author's Response: Thank you! And no, Severus doesn't misplace things...usually. I mean, he's not perfect, but he probably thinks he is...lol. Glad you enjoyed this chapter and thanks again for letting me know! |
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