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Title: Chapter 20 15 Feb 2008 7:47 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm SO happy you updated! *hands Jade a Snape-shaped cookie*

    I enjoy reading this story very much, it is incredably well writen, you have a real tallent for it. Everyone's emotions are writen so well, you can feel them youself as you read, at least I can. You have very good ideas and keep everyone well in character. I really like how you change from Snape to Harry because I like both of their points of veiw. PLEASE post again soon! It was awsome for you to have updated so soon, but I'd like another chapter anyway ^_^ I love this story, it's one of my favorites, as I've undouptably said before.

    Author's Response:

    A Snape-shaped cookie!  I should try to make some of those...  I did make a Harry Potter shaped cookie when decorating them for Chrismtas. lol. 

    Well, I for one have to say that I'm very pleased that you are enjoying my story, and I'm so glad you're back online!  It seems as if a lot of people have up and left :(  Probably very busy with real life...the real life that I tend to ignore...lol.  Also, I'm flattered that you think my ideas are good, because sometimes I feel like my plot isn't the most interesting. 

    I switched points of view in this one because we're getting down to the end, and I think it's important for the readers to understand how the two are changing in their views of each other.  I didn't want to drag on and on, but a little insight now and again is good :) 

    Thanks very much for taking the time to leave me a review!  A new chapter should be up soon ;)

Title: Chapter 20 15 Feb 2008 6:47 am
Reviewer: NotEvenHere (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I loved this chapter! Great job, Jade. I like Snape's character evolving to realize he can take a different tactic with Harry than just being so stern all the time. I loved how gentle (I know, not really because it's Snape) he was at the end there and in the Hospital Wing and I loved how conflicted Harry's emotions are about Ginny and about Snape. A very nice, gentle chapter, yet is was thought-provoking. I loved it, as usual. :o)

    Author's Response:

    Thank you so much!  By the way, I do believe you might just earn yourself featured-story status, which you completely deserve...look at all of those first-rate chapters you've been able to chug out! 

    And yes, you're completely right about Snape.  No, he's not changing his beliefs on discipline, but he's slowly changing the way he approaches it. It's not necessary to be stern all of the time.  Of course, Snape's had his small moments of kindness throughout, but if he really wants to do anything good for Harry, he needs to realize that Harry is an adolescent that needs reassurance and support, rather than just a wagging finger in his face all of the time...

    Again, I really appreciate your review.  I'm still in awe of your ability to write so quickly and still have the time to read and leave feedback!  You must have some sort of superpower that I wish I had... lol ;)


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