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Reviews For Emerald Eyes
Title: Chapter 22 05 Mar 2008 9:53 pm
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter here and I'm glad to see that harry and Sev are getting along better! I've posted the rest of my story!

    Author's Response: I saw that you posted!  And I FINALLY get to sit down tonight and do some reading :)  I can't wait.  Thanks for taking the time to read my newest chapter and let me know what you thought! 
Title: Chapter 22 05 Mar 2008 9:33 pm
Reviewer: Twinheart (Signed) [Report This]
    Great, great chapter!! Wonderful interaction between Harry and Sev. I love Harry's physicality...so incredibly realistic childish mannerisms. You capture beautifully that twitchy restless energy and stream-of-conscious blurting out that so many 12-yr-old boys exhibit! Favorite line: "You're not going to pass out, are you? You look funny." I burst out in a wild laugh and scared the cat.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you so much for your kind words!  I do write quite a twitchy little Harry, but I there were moments like that in the books that just made me connect with his character because it was so realistic.  Twelve is actually a very young age, as I discovered when I was around my twelve-year-old cousin for a week when I babysit for her and her brother last summer.  I know that Harry is used to relying on himself a lot, but in this story, since he's got Snape, he's able to just be the kid that he never really got to be.  Sometimes, anyway ;) 

    And I do have to admit that writing a frustrated, on-the-verge-of-a-migraine Severus in this chapter was probably the most entertaining of all. lol. 

    Anyway, thanks again for the wonderful review!  As always, I'm thrilled to see that you're still reading and enjoying my story :)


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