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Reviews For Emerald Eyes
Author's Response: Thanks, Beth :) I appreciate your thoughtful review. Everything should unfold in the next few chapters. There will be a scene from Snape's perspective in the next chapter that will, hopefully, start to mesh everything together ;) And I'm glad the site's back up as well. It's the only one where I don't have to go searching for everything, scratching my head for hours, because this one's so easily accessible.
Tracy Author's Response: Hi Tracy :) I really hope that when I finally weave everything together, I don't leave out a thread or two...LOL. I think I'll need an Alpha reader for the last couple of chapters just to make sure everything comes together smoothly. I'll be a bit nervous. ;) Anyway, Thanks for all of your great reviews for my most recent chapters! I love the fact that you're still reading and enjoying my story. You were one of the authors that insipred me to begin my own story. So thank you for that :)
Lines I love: "The warm flames licked at Harry's cheeks as he blinked rapidly at Snape through the green haze." Sheesh, could you have any more descriptive imagery in one sentence? :o) "studying the lines that rutted the man's features." Genius. It just really makes Snape seem all the more weary. I loved that bit as well with the two of them in the corridor. Snape really is letting his guard down, though of course he's not meaning to. I love Harry being able to get a peek into old Snape. Great as usual. Can't wait for what happens in the Tower. :o) Author's Response: Oh, thanks for the wonderful review, Tabitha :) Just so you know, I may change my mind and work on the next chapter of SfS a bit sooner than I had originally planned. I have ideas for the next chapter flickering around in my head, and I need to get them down before I lose them. LOL. I feel like I've got a handle on this story now, and the next chapter is cemented in my mind. So perhaps it can wait... No other word besides 'rutted' seemed to describe what I was trying to portray about Snape's features. I'm so, so, so happy to know that that particular line stood out to you, indicating Snape's weariness. I rarely feel like I'm doing something right, so I suppose this is one of those moments when I can 'breathe easy'. ;) I could hug you for pointing that out to me. Seriously. The next chapter will begin in the Tower and shift over to Snape's perspective in another setting. I believe it's high-time we figure out just what's going on in that man's head. I hope it goes all right. Writing Snape is nerve-wracking...LOL. Well, once again, thank you for being so awesome and cheering me up with your lovely words of encouragement :) I hope you're weekend went all right.
Author's Response: Thank you! It's really lovely to see that you're still reading :) I appreciate your feedback and your letting me know that you're still enjoying.
Hooray that the site is back up and I can finally post again! I used the time it was down to write though! Update soon! Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter. Writing Ginny so vulnerable and confused actually was creepy for me...lol. Odd how my mind spins these eerie situations... And I definitely agree about asking for help. That whole concept was emphasized by countless people in Harry's life, and in the end, he finally accepts it from Ron and Hermione. But I suppose I'm exploring the effects of asking for help a bit early on for Harry. ;) Would have saved him a lot of grief... Well, thanks for the review! I spent some time this past week writing as well ;) |
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