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Title: Chapter 24 16 Nov 2022 7:42 pm
Reviewer: Wejee (Signed) [Report This]
    This chapter’s was just beyond amazing … i loved the way that you describe small moments that many of us experience but take for granted like the coldness of the comforters, the sleepiness one experience before actually going to sleep, all these details just make this scene more real and tangible

    I love the gentle way severus treats harry and hiw harry us confused by such kindness but still accepts it an craves it

    Again what a wonderful chapter
    Thank you very much
Title: Chapter 24 16 Feb 2012 12:41 am
Reviewer: Lady Destiny (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved it!
Title: Chapter 24 20 May 2009 8:56 pm
Reviewer: AN ITALIAN READER - CHIARA (Anonymous) [Report This]
    THE BEDSIDE SCENE IS FANTASTIC, IT IS SO FAMILIAR LIKE AS NATURAL A SON GET ON WITH HIS FATHER, I MEAN IT MAKE DEEP LOVE EMOTION BETWINE THE TWO MALE ,BUT IT IS VERY STRANGE TO READ ABOUT THE ICY-SNAPE HAVE A HEART AND WITH HARRY NOT LESS.
    ps. I'M ITALIAN AND NT VERY WELL IS WRITING ENGLISH SO PLEASE EXCUSE MY GRAMMA MISTAKES
Title: Chapter 24 02 May 2009 7:56 pm
Reviewer: xxslytheringirlxx (Signed) [Report This]
    this is my favorit chapter snape being so fatherly to herry towards the end but in an okward sort of way i love it!
    XSGX
Title: Chapter 24 21 Apr 2008 8:46 pm
Reviewer: Elphaba (Signed) [Report This]
    OMG What a lovely chapter

    Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing all of my latest chapters!  I'm so glad you decided to give my story a chance, and I appreciate you taking the time out to let me know how you're liking it so far :) 
Title: Chapter 24 27 Mar 2008 11:58 pm
Reviewer: TrustSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm a bit behind on my reading as you can tell, but I'm thrilled I have another chapter to read after this one. :)

    I love Snape/Harry moments and this was one of the best so far. It was so (dare I say) parent/child-esk. Snape kept his slight standoffishness but gave Harry something he probably has never had -- not since his mom and dad -- a real tucking in. I absolutely loved it.

    I had to laugh when Harry asked about the Prof being mean to Neville. It wasn't so long ago that Snape was being mean to Harry but the boy doesn't even see that any more.

    Thank you for slowing the story a bit so wonderful moments like these can be added. I love fluff.
Title: Chapter 24 21 Mar 2008 5:30 am
Reviewer: bugeyedmonster2 (Signed) [Report This]
    Eagerly anticipating the next chapter.

    (^_^)/

    Author's Response: Thank you!!  I'm actually getting ready to post it in about two minutes...LOL ;)
Title: Chapter 24 20 Mar 2008 10:16 pm
Reviewer: DaughterOfAres (Signed) [Report This]
    Excellent chapter!

    I loved Severus tucking Harry in. That entire scene was incredibly well done.

    Sorry, I haven't reviewed the last couple of chapters, alot of stuff has been going on and I haven't had the chance. :(

    I love this story and I'm going to be sorry to see it end, but I'm sure you'll do a great job ending it.

    Please update soon. :)

    Author's Response:

    Oh, it's wonderful to hear from you!  I'm so glad you found a moment to review :)  It made my day. I horrible at calculations and I believe I'm still about three chapters from end, not including an epilogue...so yes, I suppose I'm nearly finished, but not as early as I thought I might be. LOL.  *rolls eyes at self* 

    Thanks for the review, Tiffany :)

Title: Chapter 24 20 Mar 2008 5:46 pm
Reviewer: Lily (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I totally love this chapter. It was fluffy but not too much. I like how your treated the emotions that Harry felt but was unfamiliar with and the way that Snape was taking care of him while trying to still be 'Snapelike'. Lolz. Update soon!

    Author's Response:

    I'm so glad you liked it!  Thanks for the review!  And it's good to see that you're still reading and enjoying the story :)  Yes, there was definitely unfamiliarity on both sides of the situation... However, the scene proved to be more natural than either of them realized, I think ;) 

Title: Chapter 24 20 Mar 2008 2:22 am
Reviewer: Le Skrewt (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I really, really liked the bedside scene. Your Snape is such a perfect mix of sternness, seriousness, concern & caring - a not-overly-demonstrative man who nonetheless is NOT cold or completely undemonstrative. His small but intense actions in this scene have more impact than a bucketful of fluffy hugs (not that I don't like those too, in their place!)

    Author's Response: I'm the sort of person who doesn't enjoy a ton of fluff in a story, so I was a bit unsure of how this story would go over... I must say, I'm relieved to hear that you found the scene to be well-balanced with Snape's character :)  Thanks so much for reassuring me.  I write another story (a Sirius/Harry guardian fic) where it is easy to play around with the tender, 'sweet' moments between the two; however, it's much more difficult when it comes to Snape...  But I'm so glad you liked this chapter!  And again, thanks for the terrific review!  I certainly appreciate it :)

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