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Reviews For Emerald Eyes
Title: Chapter 24 19 Mar 2008 5:50 pm
Reviewer: mahawee (Anonymous) [Report This]
    that was so great ,, i liked the bedside scne the best

    Author's Response: Thank you!!! 
Title: Chapter 24 19 Mar 2008 12:22 pm
Reviewer: Eva (Signed) [Report This]
    Nice and waiting for the next chapter!

    Author's Response: Thanks, Eva :)  The new chapter should be up soon!
Title: Chapter 24 19 Mar 2008 10:11 am
Reviewer: bkerrmom1 (Signed) [Report This]
    I can feel the connection you are forming between the two and it works Brilliantly! Excelent chapter!

    Author's Response: Thank you!!  I'm thrilled to know that you're still reading and enjoying the story :)  I appreciate you letting me know!
Title: Chapter 24 19 Mar 2008 5:34 am
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    this is a great story, read from start to now, thats why i havn't reviewed until now, once i had started to read, i just couldn't stop, now the diary has been discovered, i take it there will be no more attacks, so in my logic harry won't need to rescue anyone from the chamber, anyway loved it and keep writing this fantastic fic

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for the marvelous review!  I'm so glad you decided to give my story a chance :)  I will definitely keep writing this fic until I'm completely finished.  Promise!

Title: Chapter 24 19 Mar 2008 3:03 am
Reviewer: teacherta (Signed) [Report This]
    I love this story- I just want to tell you what a great job you're doing! I get so excited when you post a new chapter, it makes my day!

    Author's Response: Thank you a ton for letting me know that you're reading and enjoying.  I truly appreciate it :) 
Title: Chapter 24 19 Mar 2008 12:48 am
Reviewer: NotEvenHere (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Well Jade, that was just...well, it was beautiful is what it is. I loved the last bit so much. I got the same feeling I always do when I read SFS. Like a soft melodic lullaby. It was perfectly paced to bring the reader along on a gentle breeze. It was wonderful. You truly have a knack for calm. And my heart just melted with this scene. Finally. We get something from our Snape. Something wonderful. I am very happy and I loved this line: "He didn’t understand it. He would never understand it. But he knew." There really isn't anything more to say. You captured so much in so few words. Brilliant. It made me feel a warm glow inside, much like I imagine it did for Harry. I love that you don't overdescribe. I can always just feel. And this, "he felt the warm pad of skin brush across the thin, knobby scar near his hairline before the last traces of his consciousness extinguished." Wow. What beautiful imagery you've captured with this. Again with the perfectly paced description. I can just see all of it.

    I loved the part with Neville and Harry asking Snape why he is so mean to the other boy. Poor Neville but perfect choice for who to catch the two of them in the Tower. I loved Snape tucking him into bed too, especially the part where he shakes out the blankets. "He shook them out with one hand, the brisk movement inviting the cool air to seep in, pricking Harry’s arms and legs prickled gooseflesh." Again, great imagery. I could almost feel my own skin prickling.

    Wonderfully done, as usual Jade. Brilliant. :o)

    Author's Response:

    Oh, thank you, thank you.  THANK you!  lol.  It always thrills me to receive your feedback and learn that you are still enjoying my story.  Honestly :)  This was, I think, the first tender chapter in the story where Snape actually willingly extends comfort to Harry.  And you seem to have truly understood the power in the simplicity of the scene.  Thank you for pointing out exactly what I was trying to portray in this chapter.  You always seem to nail it ;) 

    I'm glad you think that I don't 'overdescribe' as I feel that's something I've really worked on with my writing.  I discovered in college that I had this *thing* with wordiness, and since then, I've really learned to condense my sentences, using only the 'best' words, even if sometimes they're the simplest.  If that makes sense...lol. 

    Oh, and you may not have meant to do this, but you pointed out a sentence in which there was a typo LOL.  Thank you.  I've changed it.  ;)

    *sigh*  Thanks again for the review.  I'm always incredibly humbled by your praise. 

Title: Chapter 24 19 Mar 2008 12:40 am
Reviewer: silverwritingquill (Signed) [Report This]
    Only one word can describe this chapter-awesome.

    I love how you ended the chapter. Sweet and heartfelt, pretty much like the rest of the chapter. Keep up the good the work, and update soon!

    Author's Response: Thanks so much for the wonderful feedback!  This was probably the first intentionally 'sweet' chapter in the whole story, and I'm so happy you enjoyed it :)  I appreciate you letting me know!
Title: Chapter 24 19 Mar 2008 12:39 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    You updated! I enjoyed reading this chapter alot, it was very nice with some humor. Harry defintly needs some rest, poor kid worries over so much. You've done a really good job with this story so far, it is truly brilliant and beuatiful work. I am EXTREAMLY happy that you may update tomorrow or the next day! That is wonderful, really great to hear. I enjoyed reading the bedside scene, it was a nice, quite moment, and kind of sweet ^^.

    Author's Response: I did!  LOL.  I'm so glad you liked this chapter :)  And I'm also thrilled that you found the humor among the fluff...  My update will most likely be either late tomorrow night or sometime on Thursday, like you said.  The next chapter will be longer, so it might be the latter, but don't worry; I'll get it posted ;)  Thanks for the lovely review, Beth!
Title: Chapter 24 18 Mar 2008 11:42 pm
Reviewer: Lady Julie Snape (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Need I say more than 'I love it'?

    Author's Response: Thank you :)  I'm glad you're enjoying it!
Title: Chapter 24 18 Mar 2008 11:26 pm
Reviewer: Syllva (Signed) [Report This]
    That just made my day slightly happier. Thanks. I'll be waiting for the next chapter!

    Author's Response:

    Oh, I'm glad this chapter was able to brighten up your day. ;)  Thanks for reading and leaving me some feedback!


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