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Reviews For Emerald Eyes
Author's Response: Thank you!!!
Author's Response: Thanks, Eva :) The new chapter should be up soon!
Author's Response: Thank you!! I'm thrilled to know that you're still reading and enjoying the story :) I appreciate you letting me know!
Author's Response: Thanks for the marvelous review! I'm so glad you decided to give my story a chance :) I will definitely keep writing this fic until I'm completely finished. Promise!
Author's Response: Thank you a ton for letting me know that you're reading and enjoying. I truly appreciate it :)
I loved the part with Neville and Harry asking Snape why he is so mean to the other boy. Poor Neville but perfect choice for who to catch the two of them in the Tower. I loved Snape tucking him into bed too, especially the part where he shakes out the blankets. "He shook them out with one hand, the brisk movement inviting the cool air to seep in, pricking Harry’s arms and legs prickled gooseflesh." Again, great imagery. I could almost feel my own skin prickling. Wonderfully done, as usual Jade. Brilliant. :o) Author's Response: Oh, thank you, thank you. THANK you! lol. It always thrills me to receive your feedback and learn that you are still enjoying my story. Honestly :) This was, I think, the first tender chapter in the story where Snape actually willingly extends comfort to Harry. And you seem to have truly understood the power in the simplicity of the scene. Thank you for pointing out exactly what I was trying to portray in this chapter. You always seem to nail it ;) I'm glad you think that I don't 'overdescribe' as I feel that's something I've really worked on with my writing. I discovered in college that I had this *thing* with wordiness, and since then, I've really learned to condense my sentences, using only the 'best' words, even if sometimes they're the simplest. If that makes sense...lol. Oh, and you may not have meant to do this, but you pointed out a sentence in which there was a typo LOL. Thank you. I've changed it. ;) *sigh* Thanks again for the review. I'm always incredibly humbled by your praise.
I love how you ended the chapter. Sweet and heartfelt, pretty much like the rest of the chapter. Keep up the good the work, and update soon! Author's Response: Thanks so much for the wonderful feedback! This was probably the first intentionally 'sweet' chapter in the whole story, and I'm so happy you enjoyed it :) I appreciate you letting me know!
Author's Response: I did! LOL. I'm so glad you liked this chapter :) And I'm also thrilled that you found the humor among the fluff... My update will most likely be either late tomorrow night or sometime on Thursday, like you said. The next chapter will be longer, so it might be the latter, but don't worry; I'll get it posted ;) Thanks for the lovely review, Beth!
Author's Response: Thank you :) I'm glad you're enjoying it!
Author's Response: Oh, I'm glad this chapter was able to brighten up your day. ;) Thanks for reading and leaving me some feedback! |
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