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Reviews For Emerald Eyes
Author's Response: Thanks, kreacher! It's good to know you're still reading and enjoying my story :)
I like how this is heating up and how Lockhart the Idiot's comments give the final clue to the mystery. And Snape is really worried about Harry though both of them refuse to admit it out-right. Let's just hope Harry can stay close and not try to play the hero as soon as they reach the bathroom. Ah, you're so bad for me. When I want to start writing my own chapters, I'm all "Oh, I need to get started on my own chapters of Harry Potter or . . . I could go read Jade's stuff again." And I never get started. Please write more. Author's Response: I'm pretty sure that even I, as a twenty-three year old, am notorious for getting food everywhere. I definitely sympathized with Harry in that scene ;) I always wondered how messy he would get eating treacle tart, since cleanliness has never been a huge thing for him. Weird thought, I know. Alas, the bathroom scene has finally arrived. Been forever, yes? I suppose if Harry gets himself into trouble, it won't be completely deliberate. He's sort of like that... And I must say, I simply wallowed happily in your final comment, as I'm pretty sure I've read House and Life w/ Bruce about ten times in the past two weeks ;) It's unbelievably flattering to know that you like my stuff enough to wade through it more than once. Thanks for the awesome review. I should lock my students in the supply closet, and then I'd be able to write more... *rubs hands together in plotting*
I loved the scene at the table where a mere look or simple gesture from Snape can have Harry sitting up straight or eating a balanced breakfast. Adorable. Great chapter! Author's Response: Hey, Tiffany :) Glad you were able to read this chapter! I appreciate your feedback!
Love it, his dry humor never gets old. So brilliant, Lockhart is a moron beyond moronic proportions, it amazes me that anyone was able to put up with him for as long as they have. Sev and Harry at breakfast was great thank goodness for wandless magic. It was really funny that Harry put the sticky bun down just because of his look. They've really come a long away if Sev is getting Harry to comply to his wishes with just a cough or an eyebrow raise. (Although I think if I was faced with Snape and his eyebrows I would do what he told me too, without out much fuss). LOL. I think it was really sweet that Sev stills needs reassurance from Albus that he's doing the right thing with Harry. Can't wait to see what happens in the chamber. Keep up the awesome work and please update again soon. LES Author's Response: The sarcasm thing I can do, because I have a dry sense of humor myself. LOL. My favorite scene to write in this chapter was definitely the one between Harry, Snape, and the sweet roll, so I'm truly glad you had fun reading that one :) They really have come a long way. The scene with Albus was a tricky one, because it's challenging writing Severus as a man with weaknesses. But in the end, it seemed to work out. I'll try to have the next chapter up before the end of the month! Thank you a ton for the review, Lindsey :)
Author's Response: Thank you for letting me know that you're reading and liking my story :) The final installment of this story shouldn't be too long in coming, I hope.
Author's Response: LOL! I could never stand Lockhart in the books. I like Kenneth Branaugh, so I could stomach him a bit more in the movies...but not by much. ;) Really glad you're still enjoying my story! Thanks so much for reviewing!
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