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Reviews For Emerald Eyes
The interaction between Severus and Harry is wonderful at the end. Keep it up, dear! ~Myrrdin Author's Response: I'm so glad you're still reading and liking my story, Myrrdin! :) Yeah, the cliffhanger was bad. Sorry. *is shamefaced* But I do so hope you keep reading to find out what happens. Thanks so much for the great feedback! I plan on writing a little tonight and working hard on the last chapter tomorrow ;)
I thought it was funny when Harry told Snape not to yell at Myrtle, Snape was not amused, lol. That really sucked when Harry fell down the chamber, I bet Sev's heart was in his throat the moment Harry went disappearing into the darkness. Good thing Harry's knee is alright, otherwise that could cause quite a problem for them trying to move around in the chamber. I really liked that scene where Snape promises Harry he’ll return, it's so intense! Great job with that, it's my favorite part of this chapter. I can't wait until Snape enters that Chamber and find out what you have planned. The suspense is killing me! Author's Response: Sorry it's taken me a few days to respond. I'm here, And SO glad you were able to read this chapter ;) Yes, it took a while for the Chamber scene to arise, but all that build-up stuff was definitely necessary. Unfortunately, in real life, trust just doesn't develop overnight. And if Harry were to tackle the Chamber of Secrets right away, he would inevitably refuse to be helped by Snape. Now, he's actually obeying. Really glad you liked this chapter, Beth :) I'm writing some tonight and more tomorrow, so hopefully the next chapter will be posted mid-week. Thanks so much for the review!
Author's Response: I usually do ;) Thanks for reading!!
Author's Response: Well, thank you! It's awesome to hear that you're enjoying my story :) I appreciate your review!
Author's Response: LOL...I've been getting a lot of that lately. *sigh* I'll write quickly. I promise. ;) Thanks for the review!!
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Author's Response: The bonding has been slow-growing, but yes, you're right...this was definitely one of those chapters :) Thank you for the lovely review! I'm glad you're enjoying the story.
Snape going on his own to “battle” the Basilisk that is so cool…will be surprised if Harry stays put...all adventure struck boys will find some reason to move forward, and trouble always seem to find him LOL. Looking forward to next chapter Author's Response: Poor Harry...everyone expects him to mess up and run flailing down the Chamber...LOL. Of course, this *is* Harry we're talking about, so it's highly possible. Just know that if he gets into trouble, it won't be without purpose. ;) And yes, Snape does care for Harry even if he has an odd way of showing it. Summer vacation! *Cheers* I'm so excited! lol. I'll write some more to this story soon :) Thanks for the fantastic review! |
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