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Reviews For Emerald Eyes
Title: Chapter 32 & Epilogue 06 May 2009 4:49 am
Reviewer: xxslytheringirlxx (Signed) [Report This]
    oh my gosh you should do a sequel it would be the best thing in the world
    this is my favorit story of life!

    Author's Response: Thank you for your reviews!!  The sequel will be up within the week :-) 
Title: Chapter 32 & Epilogue 26 Feb 2009 5:52 pm
Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed) [Report This]
    Please Please Please a real sequel? Like a long one?? If I beg nicely?

    Author's Response: Oops....sorry I never responded to your review :-(  The sequel will be up within the week!  Thanks so much for reviewing, RhiannanT!
Title: Chapter 32 & Epilogue 19 Nov 2008 8:17 pm
Reviewer: lyra (Signed) [Report This]
    I know you finished this story months ago now, but I suspect that I didn't leave nearly enough reviews as I should have.

    I love this story so much. So very, very much. I just re-read it (for oh, the 3rd time) and I must beg for a sequel.

    Well done!

    Author's Response: Thanks, lyra :-)  It means a lot that you've taken such interest in my story.  I love YOUR work, so it's a huge compliment.  I plan on beginning a sequel over Christmas break. 
Title: Chapter 32 & Epilogue 18 Oct 2008 9:27 pm
Reviewer: Bluenose (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Jade, this is such a wonderful story. I had devoured it awhile back but have recently realized that it was rude of me not to have reviewed before. You have such a gift for bringing your characters to life. They are completely animated in my mind as a result of your adept description. I love the way you developed the relationship between Harry and Snape, letting it happen in a very credible way while keeping the both of them in character (well, relatively so, at least Snape kept his acerbic wit while softening just a tad). I thoroughly enjoyed this story and intend to come back and reread it soon. In fact, I'm off to fanfiction dot net to read your other story now. I'm practically tingling in anticipation of a good read! Sincerely, Stephanie (Bluenose)
Title: Chapter 32 & Epilogue 04 Aug 2008 4:00 am
Reviewer: honore11 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I really loved this. Yoo said the end..... could there be more? Is there a part 2 or something. I think you are brilliant. Looking forward to reading more from you. Thanks

    Author's Response:

    Thank you!  No, there isn't a second part to this story; however, I may decide to write a sequel in the future ;-)  I'm glad you enjoyed the story, and I appreciate your review letting me know that you did.

Title: Chapter 32 & Epilogue 05 Jul 2008 12:22 am
Reviewer: Kirinin (Signed) [Report This]
    Lovedlovedloved. I especially like how you had this story end; while we don't see Snape getting ready to adopt Harry, it's clear that they're close and he's willing to lend his support and aid when necessary. Sweet without being cloying.

    -K

    Author's Response:

    Oh, lord, sorry it took me so long to respond!  I read your review a while ago and meant to write you back but was in the midst of beta'ing a story.  What can I say--multitasking isn't my thing ;)  But I'm so glad you enjoyed the story!  I was a bit wary of how readers would respond to the ending, so knowing that you liked it is really relieving...and encouraging...and just makes me grin.  Thanks for sticking through this story 'til the end and another thanks for letting me know what you thought, Kirinin! 

Title: Chapter 32 & Epilogue 01 Jul 2008 10:46 pm
Reviewer: pdantzler (Signed) [Report This]
    This was the greatest ending ever. I was afraid it might end with Snape declaring he wanted Harry to come live with him and everything out of character, but it was so quiet and calm - it was perfect.

    Please write a sequel. I need it - your updates were always a ray of sunshine in my cloud-covered life. I miss getting the update emails and rushing to read what you have written. But if you need a break or want to work on something else for a while, I completely understand.

    I've enjoyed Harry being small in this story, but I would also like to see their relationship as he gets older. It's much easier to move and hush a boy of twelve - it's harder with a sixteen-year-old.

    Just some food for thought - I know you'll make the right decision. I've enjoyed the ride the whole way.

    Author's Response:

    The second I posted the final chapter, I thought...Oh, Lord, here we go.  I knew that there would be a few people who complained about Snape not taking Harry in for the summer.  But I had planned it like that for a long time, and I promised myself I would stick with it.  Of course, now I've left an open door for a sequel, and I'm seriously thinking of writing one once I finish Starting From Scratch.  But I have to say--the fact that you found my ending so satisfying just makes me smile.  In fact, I'm still smiling right now. lol.  I'm so flattered that you've enjoyed my story (and I know I've said that too many times to count).  But it's the truth.  I agree that it would be interesting to continue this story through years until Harry is older.  It would be a struggle to keep the plotline original since Snape/Harry mentoring stories taking place post OotP are so much more common than li'l Harry stories, but it's a challenge I may decide to tackle. 

    Thanks for all of your encouragement, Perry.  I really appreciate it :)

Title: Chapter 32 & Epilogue 25 Jun 2008 7:20 pm
Reviewer: Anterastilis (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Thank you for sharing your story with us all! It was well done -- the development of the relationship was believable, and the changes to the story worked very well. Glad to hear you're thinking about writing a sequel. :)

    Author's Response: I'm really glad you liked the story, and I'm even more happy that you considered the progression of Harry's and Snape's relationship believable, as that was my main goal in writing Emerald Eyes :)  I am still considering a sequel, and I appreciate your interest.  Thanks so much for the review!
Title: Chapter 32 & Epilogue 23 Jun 2008 9:06 am
Reviewer: dorothy (Anonymous) [Report This]
    wow, great work! i love how you retwisted the story, this is how it should have been!!! and the characterization of snape was thoroughly enjoyable. thanks for a great read, and please write a sequel!

    Author's Response: I would have adored everything turning out like this in canon, but alas, I suppose that's what fanfiction is for, huh? LOL.  ;)  Snape was thoroughly enjoyable to write, I must say, so I'm glad you had fun reading his little snarky comments.  Thank you for reading my story and for sharing your thoughts!
Title: Chapter 32 & Epilogue 20 Jun 2008 6:53 pm
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    that was a very well written chapter, so were the rest of them and i'm glad it all turned out right in the end and i think you should write a sequel to this wonderful fic

    Author's Response: Thank you, kreacher :)  I'm glad you enjoyed how this story turned out, and I appreciate you sharing your thoughts on the ending!

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