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Title: Chapter 31 14 Jun 2008 3:37 pm
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    very well written this chapter was, glad that sev and harry dealt with the basilisk and killed it and got out of the chamber safely

    Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed this chapter.  Thank you for the compliment :)
Title: Chapter 31 14 Jun 2008 9:05 am
Reviewer: NotEvenHere (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Do you even know how good you are writing action? Eeeks, I was so riveted. And I just was so mesmorized along with Harry with the whole basilisk thing. I felt like I was swaying with him as he was drawn in. It was really creepy, but in a very fun way! :oP

    This was my favorite part: "That’s it, then?”


    Snape eyed him sardonically. “Were you expecting fireworks and a parade, Potter?”--It was so funny, I nearly choked. So perfectly Snape.

    And then when Snape asked Harry if he had disobeyed him and come looking for him, he was tender in a Snape sort of way, that only you could write so well. with the pads of his fingers there. Sigh. So sweet.

    And then Snape actually giving in to Harry and allowing him to make a choice for himself for a change. That he respects him as a person, instead of an irritant. I loved it.

    And it was such a jolt when they went back to Dumbles' office...like watching a movie camera, panning over the scene with the diary and the sword. Wow. Your descriptions are just so intense. Loved it! Though I really can't believe it's about to end. So sad. I really enjoy this story so much, so thanks for all your hard work on it!

    Author's Response:

    I was actually really nervous about writing the action in this chapter (but I already vented to you about that...lol).  It's so stressful trying to get all the loose ends tied up!  I actually have a couple more questions for you...more like asking for your advice about something.  So be on the lookout for my annoying emails....LOL.  ;) 

    Thanks again for previewing and for leaving such great feedback.  I know there'll be readers who expect more of a climax for this chapter, but as long as you approve, it makes me feel as if I've done something right.  After all, life doesn't always work like that...

Title: Chapter 30 07 Jun 2008 8:01 am
Reviewer: Myrrdin (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Nu! Don't stop there!! Okay, that's a very good cliffie, and I would probably do the same thing; however, my little fangirl self is slightly angry. That's okay, though. This story is well worth the wait.

    The interaction between Severus and Harry is wonderful at the end. Keep it up, dear!

    ~Myrrdin

    Author's Response:

    I'm so glad you're still reading and liking my story, Myrrdin!  :)  Yeah, the cliffhanger was bad.  Sorry. *is shamefaced*  But I do so hope you keep reading to find out what happens.  Thanks so much for the great feedback!  I plan on writing a little tonight and working hard on the last chapter tomorrow ;)

Title: Chapter 30 07 Jun 2008 5:43 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    Finally! I almost died waiting for this chapter, but the Chamber has finally been found!

    I thought it was funny when Harry told Snape not to yell at Myrtle, Snape was not amused, lol. That really sucked when Harry fell down the chamber, I bet Sev's heart was in his throat the moment Harry went disappearing into the darkness. Good thing Harry's knee is alright, otherwise that could cause quite a problem for them trying to move around in the chamber.

    I really liked that scene where Snape promises Harry he’ll return, it's so intense! Great job with that, it's my favorite part of this chapter.

    I can't wait until Snape enters that Chamber and find out what you have planned. The suspense is killing me!

    Author's Response:

    Sorry it's taken me a few days to respond.  I'm here,  And SO glad you were able to read this chapter ;)  Yes, it took a while for the Chamber scene to arise, but all that build-up stuff was definitely necessary.  Unfortunately, in real life, trust just doesn't develop overnight.  And if Harry were to tackle the Chamber of Secrets right away, he would inevitably refuse to be helped by Snape.  Now, he's actually obeying. 

    Really glad you liked this chapter, Beth :)  I'm writing some tonight and more tomorrow, so hopefully the next chapter will be posted mid-week.  Thanks so much for the review!

Title: Chapter 30 05 Jun 2008 11:17 pm
Reviewer: Tash (Anonymous) [Report This]
    While it's another great chapter- I hate the cliffie- update soon!

    Author's Response: I usually do ;)  Thanks for reading!!
Title: Chapter 30 05 Jun 2008 10:10 pm
Reviewer: chalicity (Anonymous) [Report This]
    oh my goodness, this is the most darling, sweetest snape/harry father/son -type story ever. absolutely beautiful and exciting and so very dear.

    Author's Response: Well, thank you!  It's awesome to hear that you're enjoying my story :)  I appreciate your review!
Title: Chapter 30 04 Jun 2008 10:44 pm
Reviewer: Elphaba (Signed) [Report This]
    Ack! Great Chapter! Bad Ending! LOL Ok Good Ending but a Hanger!

    Author's Response: LOL...I've been getting a lot of that lately.  *sigh*  I'll write quickly.  I promise. ;)  Thanks for the review!!
Title: Chapter 30 04 Jun 2008 9:58 pm
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    ver cute lov ethis chapter

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Chapter 30 04 Jun 2008 8:25 pm
Reviewer: mahi (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great chapter. I like that Harry and Snape both want to protect each other and Harry finds comfort in Snape. I also like the idea that Harry cant lie to Snape anymore and Snape is able to interpret the child's need for comfort and holds him closer to himself. Its a great chapter showing their bonding.

    Author's Response:

    The bonding has been slow-growing, but yes, you're right...this was definitely one of those chapters :)  Thank you for the lovely review!  I'm glad you're enjoying the story.

Title: Chapter 30 04 Jun 2008 5:17 pm
Reviewer: Keats (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Glad you updated, now you are on vacation hopefully we would get more updates soon. This is just so exciting; love the relationship between Harry and Snape. It is so obvious Snape cares greatly for the boy, like a father would care for a son; Harry definitely looks to Snape as a role model.
    Snape going on his own to “battle” the Basilisk that is so cool…will be surprised if Harry stays put...all adventure struck boys will find some reason to move forward, and trouble always seem to find him LOL. Looking forward to next chapter

    Author's Response:

    Poor Harry...everyone expects him to mess up and run flailing down the Chamber...LOL.  Of course, this *is* Harry we're talking about, so it's highly possible.  Just know that if he gets into trouble, it won't be without purpose. ;)  And yes, Snape does care for Harry even if he has an odd way of showing it. 

    Summer vacation! *Cheers*  I'm so excited! lol.  I'll write some more to this story soon :)  Thanks for the fantastic review!


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