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Reviews For Emerald Eyes
Author's Response: Thank you so much! And yeah, well...Harry lives to mess up. Honestly. lol.
Author's Response: Wow....thank you for the awesome feedback! I'm flattered :)
Author's Response: It's insane how many times I tweaked that plan. And then I thought...well...they're young, so obviously it's not going to work out perfectly. And as for Harry confiding in Snape....we'll see ;) Thanks very much for reading and reviewing!
This was a wonderful chapter. I loved Harry from start to finish: pinging the cauldron, his attention so easily distracted, his emotions riding just below the surface, his attitude just oozing, the defiance underscored by sheer terror, his capitulation just a fraction of a second too late and his final declaration "I'm twelve" Perfect! Perhaps you've been a fly on the wall at my home!lol Snape was fabulous. He understands these boys but doesn't. I loved that Harry can sense that something's changing with his relationship with Snape. He's a little clueless yet, but he did briefly contemplate confiding in Snape, and he's admitting to himself that the great plan might not be so great. I'm rambling. I loved it. Please, please post more soon. Mamaduck Author's Response: Well, no, not a fly, but I have been twelve. :) I guess I just wanted to make Harry's "tantrum" believable but not without purpose. He's been through a lot, and regardless of how old you are, it's hard to keep your emotions in check when you have a lot on your mind. I quite enjoy writing Snape, so I'm glad you think he's fab. And hey, ramble away...I love reading your feedback! Thanks so much for the wonderful review ;)
I really enjoyed this chapter, especially Harry temper tantrum at the end, it was so realistic and so cute! I'm eagerly looking foward to the next chapter. Author's Response: Hi! Thanks for reviewing :) And yay!...high five for realism. lol. I suppose I was just noticing a pattern with the whole chapter thing, and was just curious. Anyway, so glad you enjoyed the chapter.
I loved this chapter! I was so sad when it was over :( Author's Response: LOL...I didn't even mean for "hoot" to be a pun. But it works, doesn't it. ;) Thanks so much for the review! i'm so glad you're enjoying the story.
Author's Response: Thank you! Yeah, I thought that was a bit comical myself. Hope you find time to update your story! :)
Thanks so much for updating. I noticed that you had updated when I checked my e-mail earlier, but I was heading out the door so I couldn't take the time to read. Do you have any idea how hard that was? Dang this RL business for interfering with my reading fanfiction. LOL. I loved the chapter. Poor Harry is headed for a major meltdown with all that's going on. What in the world was the boy thinking when defying Snape like that? No sense of self-preservation. I was astounded that Snape handled that the way he did. I would have thought that he would have reacted to such outright defiance by wholly and completely flying off the handle. That man is just full of surprises. I'm so glad that Snape is finally able to realize that Harry is just a 12 year old boy with a lot on his shoulders. I think he may be the only adult that actually can see Harry for who he really is. I hope that Harry will realize that Snape is the perfect person to talk to about the voice he's hearing, but I have a feeling that it will take a complete meltdown on Harry's part before that happens. Thanks so much for the update. You rock! I truly can't wait for the next... Author's Response: Yes, it makes perfect sense, actually.rnrnThank YOU for reviewing! I love reading your positive feedback. It's awesome. Yes, Harry makes stupid decisions, but he's twelve. I know that I didn't always think twice about what I did when I was that young, you know? rnrnSnape is very stern, which is mostly all Harry sees at the moment; but we know different, don't we ;)rnrnA meltdown...hmmmm...we'll see... lol.rnrnThanks again for reading and reviewing. I really appreciate it!
It`s so funny for me to see Snape taking the attemp to take care of someone, he could be so awkward at times... I love it =) Keep writing Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Yeah, when I was writing I thought....huh...this would be the first time Harry speaks to Dumbledore in his office. So naturally, Harry would feel a bit awkward...I think, anyway.
The trip to Lockhart’s office was, as always, a complete and utter waste of time hehe lockhart has always been one of my all time fav characters Author's Response: I'm glad you liked that line...lol. I'm really not a fan of Lockhart in the books, but I actually like how Kenneth Branaugh (sp?) portrayed him in the movie. Thanks for reading and reviewing! |
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